Oh dear lord, his life really is becoming complicated :P Well if Rarity loses him to Pinkie...kinda her own fault. She was the one who kept on saying she didn't want him as a 'drakefriend' *Snickers* and kept on leading him on for so long...for shame, Rarity!
I really, really, REALLY hope this story actually ends with Spike ending up with both Pinkie and Rarity. But if I had to choose between the two, I'd choose Rarity to be with Spike.
I detect a bit of spilight in this!! great detail excellent flow and the plot of this chapter!!! AMAZING!! When Pinkie was... I guess talking to that other stallion I knew it was going to go down like that I half expected Pinkie to simply kick his butt but to actually have her experience the fear and terror of almost being violated... Deep my friend, very deep. Spike should have hit that stallion just a lot harder, if you ask me. also to have Spike and Pinkie in such an intimate situation, if you're a romantic you'll know what I mean, was down right beautiful. over all great job. (Maybe I'll go read this 6 more times?) Wait here comes the Flutter Spike!! or second scenario the shit storm approaches everyone take cover!! Chow Bennet out P.S. the flow of the story was halted by blatant interruptions in the grammar i cant go back to show simply becasue i get caught up in the story, I'll proofread this for you just to fix the errors. if you want me to, anyways.
1660143 Thank you, I'd appreciate that. I try and catch my grammar as I edit it in to the site, but I only catch so much. Help would really be appreciated Also thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad everyone's enjoying it and trust me when I say you'll really enjoy the next chapter. It's a doozy.
I have to ask, what the hell happened to the Tentacle plant? I was seriously expecting for that Fluttershy/Tentacle Plant dream to be in this. Why wasn't it?
I was kinda debating that. I do want to put that in, but I'm kinda messing with the order of the events so they fit better with how the story proceeds. I will put it in, so don't worry. Sorry if it disappointed you.
*shakes his head* Why am I reading clopfics all the time? Oh yeah, because I'm a dirty colt... Spike has his problems with two mares? I 'fear' an impending Fluttershy session will make his situation worse...and who knows if Twilight will get some 'dragonsplit with cream' too... And whats up with Rainbow Dash and Applejack? RD would be all over a place to enjoy doing nothing - and Apllejack? Well everypony needs a vacation sometimes. I'm looking forward to another chapter of your story.
Even when she's trying to win Spike over, Pinkie is still hyper, expect when she's about to be raped, she's lucky Spike sent him flying. For some reason I can imagine Celestia appearing before Spike and saying something along the lines of "Don't drag me into this."
Here's the third list of grammatical errors. *Separate into different paragraph* “Oh, you’re up,” Twilight said, being the first to meet his gaze. “I thought you were going to sleep in.” “Nah, I’m up,” he said as he stretched his arms above his head. “What’s for breakfast?” “What do you think?” Twilight sarcastically asked. “What’s up with that, Spike?” Pinkie Pie chimed in. “You weren’t up all night fooling around were you?” “You suuuure?” Pinkie said as she secretly lifted her left hoof under the table to brush against his scaly leg, Rarity was silently drinking her tea like a proper lady, paying little to no attention to Pinkie Pie’s inclinations while Spike tried his best not to cringe as Pinkie’s hoof started traveling north. *Separate into different paragraph*“Speaking of party,” Twilight joined in, “how was Fancypants’ party, Rarity? Did you make any new connections?” “Not really, the party wasn’t really full of the clientele I was hoping to meet.” she answered, putting her tea down to look at Twilight. “Yes, I had a wonderful time; mainly because Spike decided to accompany me.” “I had fun alright,” he said with a smirk as he took a mouthful of oatmeal. All of a sudden, Spike felt Pinkie’s hoof reach his inner thigh, which caused him to start coughing. “Spike!?” “I’m fine,” He groaned and coughed, “Oatmeal went down the wrong tube.” “Don’t get so full of yourself that you forget to chew and swallow,” she told him. “Yes, and Pinkie, dear, unless you want any more party favors from me, you’ll let Spike eat.” Rarity said glaring at her as her own hoof knocked Pinkie’s away from Spike. “Okay, okay, I’ll stop. Go ahead and eat Spike.” Pinkie said as she went back to eating. Everyone continued their meal and when they were finished, Spike quickly took care of the dishes, and then everyone headed out back to the greenhouse. Spike was trying to take it all in, but he found that a very difficult task with both Rarity and Pinkie clinging onto his arms and Twilight and Fluttershy following behind. “Date, date, date, Spike and I are on a date,” Pinkie sung aloud to herself with her arm laced through Spike’s left arm. “Pinkie, dear, this isn’t a date. But if it was, Spike would be on one with me,” Rarity said with her arm laced through his right arm. “Talk about delusional.” Back near the entrance, Fluttershy gazed in awe and amazement at all the cute little animals to the big beautiful ones. “This is just as beautiful as the gardens behind Canterlot Castle,” she squealed as her wings fluttered, letting her hover in place. “So many animals, I just want to hug them, but I won’t. I learned my lesson at the Gala. I’d rather not have a repeat of that.” “Fluttershy,” she heard Twilight call out.
“ . . . ershy,” she heard in a muffled tone, “ . . . uttershy . . . Fluttershy!” She slowly opened her eyes, but everything was still blurry. After a few blinks, things started to clear up and she saw everyone looking over her. “Oh good. You’re awake.” Twilight sighed with relief. “You were running, dear, and fell forward on your face,” Rarity answered. “How are you feeling?” Fluttershy didn’t respond right away; she simply closed her eyes and tried to figure that out herself. She felt a slight pain in her head, but it was met with a nice cooling sensation. “My head hurts a little, but the ice pack feels nice.” “That’s not an ice pack,” said Spike. Fluttershy opened her eyes and saw that what she thought was an ice pack was actually Spike’s cold, scaly hand. Fluttershy's face quickly went red as she shrieked and got up flailing her hands around. “I-I-I-I’m s-s-sorry! I -d-d-d-didn’t mean to cause any trouble!” “Now you listen to me . . . ,” was all Spike cared to hear as the two mares began to argue. Not wanting to get involved in their little spat, Spike decided to make a break for the exit. When he made it out, Spike flew up to his balcony and went into his room to recover his handy dandy binoculars. If Pinkie and Rarity are gonna keep fighting, I might as well go enjoy the sights, he thought as he chuckled to himself. “Man, big breasted mares in swimsuits are the best,” he chuckled to himself. “Pinkie Pie,” he said in surprise as he then noticed the tan furred stallion standing next to her. “And who’s that with her?” The guy was a little bit taller and bigger than Pinkie herself, not that muscular, but pretty toned with a short muzzle, grey eyes and a long tan mane that stopped right at the back of his neck. He wore a thin purple open hoodie with a blue speedo swim trunks. Spike really hated to look at stallions in speedos; they left way too much to the imagination. He continued to watch as the stallion drummed up a conversation with Pinkie. He talked, she laughed and they talked some more. All the while Spike couldn’t understand why he was so fixed on them. The two began to walk and as they did, they started to look bigger through the binoculars. “Shit, they’re coming this way!” he muttered as he ducked back down behind the rocks. They finally stopped a good distance from a large rock face at the end of the beach which just made Spike even antsier. “She looks like she’s having fun. Does she like this guy?” he asked as his claws started cracking the rock under his stomach. “So, Pinkie Pie,” he heard the guy finally speak. “What do you say, wanna go out on a date with me?” he asked. “Nope,” she bluntly replied with a smile. Both Spike and the stallion went wide eyed in shock for a moment. “U-Uh, Pinkie Pie, didn’t you say I was cool before?” the stallion stammered in confusion but tried to keep a smile on his face. “Yeah, I think you’re cool.” she told him. “Then why don’t w-,” “Nope,” Pinkie interrupted with a smile again. “What?” “Sorry, but I can’t. I have Spike,” she told him as she looked away from him. “Spike, what is he, your coltfriend?” The stallion asked as Pinkie grabbed her hands behind her back and started hopped a few steps away from him. Spike’s mind went blank for a moment. His only reaction was to duck back behind the rocks and turn his back so he could lay his back against it. *Separate into another paragraph* “Not exactly, you could say he’s my drakefriend,” she answered simply as she crouched down in the sand with her back to him, while she dragged her finger through the sand. “He’s always denying it and he’s a little naïve and a bit of a pervert with a big breast fetish, but he’s just embarrassed.” Dammit, Pinkie Pi. You may be able to explain things well, but keep that stuff to yourself. Spike thought to himself. “I don’t know what a drakefriend is but I’m better than that guy,” The stallion told her, “I’m rich and I’m good looking, right?” “That doesn’t matter,” she said as she stood up, “I want Spike. He’s the only one I love.” On the beach, the stallion was beside himself. He tightened his fist and grits his teeth until he finally calmed down. “I see,” he said as he came up behind Pinkie Pie, “If that’s the case, I’ll just make sure you never see him again.” “I can’t, no; I won’t let nice, huge breasts like these go to someone else.” the stallion said as he slowly zeroed in on Pinkie, holding his hands up like a savage animal ready to pounce. Pinkie looked and saw the guy getting closer and closer. She wanted to run, but her legs wouldn’t move. She wasn’t just scared, she was terrified. “No! Someone,” she cried as she tightly shut her eyes, letting tears stream down her face, “Spike!” Just as the stallion was a couple of feet away from Pinkie, Spike landed between the two. The stallion stammered back a few steps; but before he stopped, Spike pulled his fist back and punched the stallion square in the face. He pushed the stallion back off his feet and sent him flying into the ocean. Spike watched the stallion make a huge splash, and then gave a snort, causing green flames to shoot from his nostrils. “S-Spike . . . you came? You came to save me?” she asked, her voice still sounding a little shaken up. “Don’t sound so surprised,” he said sounding a little hurt as he averted his eyes and his cheeks started going red. “Spike,” she sniffled trying to wipe the tears from her eyes, “Spike!” “Spike . . .” Pinkie called to him, finally breaking the silence. “Pinkie . . .” Spike said, stopping mid sentence and averting his eyes, “sorry, I . . .” “Why are you apologizing? You saved me,” she smiled at him, which caused him to look back at her. “Of course I did. You called for me, so naturally I’d come.” In one quick motion, Pinkie closed the distance by planting her lips and tongue in Spike’s mouth. “Spike, I love you!” Pinkie shrieked as Spike’s licking caused shivered to run down her spine, “I love you!” “I love you too, Pinkie,” Spike said he pulled away and planted a kiss on her cheek. “Yes, Spike, play with my chest more,” she pleaded. “You’re the only one allowed to touch my breasts.” “Spike, I swear you’re like a baby sometimes,” “What? Why’d you stop, I was so close,” she complained as she looked up at him. “Don’t worry,” Spike said as he sat up on his knees and removed the rest of her bikini, revealing her dripping wet pussy, “I know how to make you feel even better.” Spike then hauled Pinkie’s legs up bending them over her with her wet sex completely exposed to the drake. Just looking at it made Spike’s inner fire all the hotter as well as causing smoke to flow from his nostrils. Spike placed his hands on his side of her pussy, spreading it open as he lagged his tongue out and proceeded to eat her out. *Separate into another paragraph* Pinkie moaned as her heart raced and Spike dug his tongue in as far as it would go, completely enjoying the pure sweet sugary taste of her juices. Pinkie felt Spike’s serpentine tongue writing around inside her as her walls tried to contract around it, clearly mistaking it for the one thing she was starting to crave. “Spike, I want my favorite popsicle now.” She told him. Spike couldn’t take it anymore as he stood up. “Pinkie, I wanna put it in.” “Yes,” she replied in a breathless tone, “I want it too. I want yours inside me, Spike.” “Don’t tease now,” she told him. “Put it in. Hurry!” “Spike . . .,” was all Pinkie could say as she let out a gasp soon after. “Pinkie,” Spike groaned in a breathless tone. “You try moving too.” She loved it; but more importantly, she loved Spike, knowing full well he was the only one who could make her feel this way. While Pinkie worked her magic, Spike couldn’t help but feel the inner fire make it all the way down south and slowly rising up again. “Wow, Pinkie, it looks like your cunt’s trying to eat me,” he chuckled, breathing almost as hard as her. “I bet,” Pinkie said as she hunched forward and placed her hands in front of her on the ground, trying to brace herself, still moving her hips and refusing to stop. “It’s because your dick’s hitting me so deep inside. It feels so good.” “Spike, deeper,” she begged, “I want it deeper!” “No problem,” he replied as he sat up and grabbed her chest. Pinkie closed her eyes and simply let Spike indulge in his favorite pass time as he massaged her. “Pinkie, I’m gonna cum,” he groaned, “I wanna cum inside you.” “Cum inside!” she told him. “Fill me up! Give me lots of your cum!” “I’m cumming!” he shouted, wrapping his arms around her as he felt the inner fire reached its limit and he felt his climax hit like an explosion. “Wow . . . there’s so much,” Pinkie heaved as she and Spike came down from their high and rested in the sand. “That’s because you told me too.” he breathlessly replied. Pinkie then noticed that the whole time, Spike hadn’t even loosened their embrace. She wanted to say something, but didn’t want him to let so for once she remained silent. Pinkie shifted onto her side so she was lying on the sand next to him and looked into Spike’s eyes as she said, “Spike, I love you.” “Me too,” he said. Spike couldn’t help the smirk that stretched to the corner of his face. Holy Celestia, what have I gotten myself into with these mares? You made off with my swimsuit and it can only be for one reason. Pinkie, Celestia help you, if you broke your promise and snuck off with Spike, I promise you won’t be walking right for a month, Rarity thought as she ran like her life depended on it.
Here's the third installment. Enjoy
Awesome! Loving the story so far! Well done! :) Can't wait for chapter 4!
Oh dear lord, his life really is becoming complicated :P Well if Rarity loses him to Pinkie...kinda her own fault. She was the one who kept on saying she didn't want him as a 'drakefriend' *Snickers* and kept on leading him on for so long...for shame, Rarity!
Only issue I saw. Good stuff!
I'm sensing eventual... what's the phrase... Menage a trois? Or something. But basically a romantic three-way that all parties consent to and enjoy.
See, I don't get Rarity's deal. She doesn't have a claim over Spike, whereas Pinkie does.
I really, really, REALLY hope this story actually ends with Spike ending up with both Pinkie and Rarity. But if I had to choose between the two, I'd choose Rarity to be with Spike.
I detect a bit of spilight in this!! great detail excellent flow and the plot of this chapter!!! AMAZING!!
When Pinkie was... I guess talking to that other stallion I knew it was going to go down like that I half expected Pinkie to simply kick his butt but to actually have her experience the fear and terror of almost being violated... Deep my friend, very deep. Spike should have hit that stallion just a lot harder, if you ask me. also to have Spike and Pinkie in such an intimate situation, if you're a romantic you'll know what I mean, was down right beautiful. over all great job. (Maybe I'll go read this 6 more times?)
Wait here comes the Flutter Spike!! or second scenario the shit storm approaches everyone take cover!! Chow Bennet out
P.S. the flow of the story was halted by blatant interruptions in the grammar i cant go back to show simply becasue i get caught up in the story, I'll proofread this for you just to fix the errors. if you want me to, anyways.
1660143 Thank you, I'd appreciate that. I try and catch my grammar as I edit it in to the site, but I only catch so much. Help would really be appreciated Also thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad everyone's enjoying it and trust me when I say you'll really enjoy the next chapter. It's a doozy.
yay an update
Q: will Twilight be joining in on the fun?
I have to ask, what the hell happened to the Tentacle plant? I was seriously expecting for that Fluttershy/Tentacle Plant dream to be in this. Why wasn't it?
I was kinda debating that. I do want to put that in, but I'm kinda messing with the order of the events so they fit better with how the story proceeds. I will put it in, so don't worry. Sorry if it disappointed you.
This better end up with Spike getting both Pinkie and Rarity permanently + any mix of the other four you wish to throw in, or bad things will happen
I am not worthy but you are so... have a
I know that longer waits normally mean great new chapters, but I really REAALY want chapter 4!!! 8D
*shakes his head*
Why am I reading clopfics all the time? Oh yeah, because I'm a dirty colt...
Spike has his problems with two mares? I 'fear' an impending Fluttershy session will make his situation worse...and who knows if Twilight will get some 'dragonsplit with cream' too...
And whats up with Rainbow Dash and Applejack? RD would be all over a place to enjoy doing nothing - and Apllejack? Well everypony needs a vacation sometimes.
I'm looking forward to another chapter of your story.
update please
MOAR PLEASE
Let's see how the rest of this story turns out.
Their AWESOME!!!!!!!!
I can't barely wait for the Spilights!
just one thing just how tall is Spike now like as tall as big mac or was the Blue blood beach adshen just short
RAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE!
you i'm sorry for being slow but is pinkie and spike are marefriend and drakefriend?
SPIKE: Spike splits!!!!!!!!!
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I'm just glad that LesboDash isn't in this story, I honestly enjoy the pinkie and rarity action so far and would love to see more :D
Even when she's trying to win Spike over, Pinkie is still hyper, expect when she's about to be raped, she's lucky Spike sent him flying. For some reason I can imagine Celestia appearing before Spike and saying something along the lines of "Don't drag me into this."
3834785 Yeah... I've got news for you... namely, Chapter 5.
Here's the third list of grammatical errors.
*Separate into different paragraph* “Oh, you’re up,” Twilight said, being the first to meet his gaze. “I thought you were going to sleep in.”
“Nah, I’m up,” he said as he stretched his arms above his head. “What’s for breakfast?”
“What do you think?” Twilight sarcastically asked.
“What’s up with that, Spike?” Pinkie Pie chimed in. “You weren’t up all night fooling around were you?”
“You suuuure?” Pinkie said as she secretly lifted her left hoof under the table to brush against his scaly leg,
Rarity was silently drinking her tea like a proper lady, paying little to no attention to Pinkie Pie’s inclinations while Spike tried his best not to cringe as Pinkie’s hoof started traveling north.
*Separate into different paragraph*“Speaking of party,” Twilight joined in, “how was Fancypants’ party, Rarity? Did you make any new connections?”
“Not really, the party wasn’t really full of the clientele I was hoping to meet.” she answered, putting her tea down to look at Twilight.
“Yes, I had a wonderful time; mainly because Spike decided to accompany me.”
“I had fun alright,” he said with a smirk as he took a mouthful of oatmeal.
All of a sudden, Spike felt Pinkie’s hoof reach his inner thigh, which caused him to start coughing. “Spike!?”
“I’m fine,” He groaned and coughed, “Oatmeal went down the wrong tube.”
“Don’t get so full of yourself that you forget to chew and swallow,” she told him.
“Yes, and Pinkie, dear, unless you want any more party favors from me, you’ll let Spike eat.” Rarity said glaring at her as her own hoof knocked Pinkie’s away from Spike.
“Okay, okay, I’ll stop. Go ahead and eat Spike.” Pinkie said as she went back to eating.
Everyone continued their meal and when they were finished, Spike quickly took care of the dishes, and then everyone headed out back to the greenhouse.
Spike was trying to take it all in, but he found that a very difficult task with both Rarity and Pinkie clinging onto his arms and Twilight and Fluttershy following behind.
“Date, date, date, Spike and I are on a date,” Pinkie sung aloud to herself with her arm laced through Spike’s left arm.
“Pinkie, dear, this isn’t a date. But if it was, Spike would be on one with me,” Rarity said with her arm laced through his right arm. “Talk about delusional.”
Back near the entrance, Fluttershy gazed in awe and amazement at all the cute little animals to the big beautiful ones. “This is just as beautiful as the gardens behind Canterlot Castle,” she squealed as her wings fluttered, letting her hover in place. “So many animals, I just want to hug them, but I won’t. I learned my lesson at the Gala. I’d rather not have a repeat of that.”
“Fluttershy,” she heard Twilight call out.
“ . . . ershy,” she heard in a muffled tone, “ . . . uttershy . . . Fluttershy!”
She slowly opened her eyes, but everything was still blurry. After a few blinks, things started to clear up and she saw everyone looking over her. “Oh good. You’re awake.” Twilight sighed with relief.
“You were running, dear, and fell forward on your face,” Rarity answered. “How are you feeling?”
Fluttershy didn’t respond right away; she simply closed her eyes and tried to figure that out herself. She felt a slight pain in her head, but it was met with a nice cooling sensation. “My head hurts a little, but the ice pack feels nice.”
“That’s not an ice pack,” said Spike.
Fluttershy opened her eyes and saw that what she thought was an ice pack was actually Spike’s cold, scaly hand. Fluttershy's face quickly went red as she shrieked and got up flailing her hands around. “I-I-I-I’m s-s-sorry! I -d-d-d-didn’t mean to cause any trouble!”
“Now you listen to me . . . ,” was all Spike cared to hear as the two mares began to argue.
Not wanting to get involved in their little spat, Spike decided to make a break for the exit. When he made it out, Spike flew up to his balcony and went into his room to recover his handy dandy binoculars. If Pinkie and Rarity are gonna keep fighting, I might as well go enjoy the sights, he thought as he chuckled to himself.
“Man, big breasted mares in swimsuits are the best,” he chuckled to himself.
“Pinkie Pie,” he said in surprise as he then noticed the tan furred stallion standing next to her. “And who’s that with her?”
The guy was a little bit taller and bigger than Pinkie herself, not that muscular, but pretty toned with a short muzzle, grey eyes and a long tan mane that stopped right at the back of his neck. He wore a thin purple open hoodie with a blue speedo swim trunks. Spike really hated to look at stallions in speedos; they left way too much to the imagination. He continued to watch as the stallion drummed up a conversation with Pinkie. He talked, she laughed and they talked some more. All the while Spike couldn’t understand why he was so fixed on them.
The two began to walk and as they did, they started to look bigger through the binoculars. “Shit, they’re coming this way!” he muttered as he ducked back down behind the rocks.
They finally stopped a good distance from a large rock face at the end of the beach which just made Spike even antsier.
“She looks like she’s having fun. Does she like this guy?” he asked as his claws started cracking the rock under his stomach.
“So, Pinkie Pie,” he heard the guy finally speak.
“What do you say, wanna go out on a date with me?” he asked.
“Nope,” she bluntly replied with a smile.
Both Spike and the stallion went wide eyed in shock for a moment. “U-Uh, Pinkie Pie, didn’t you say I was cool before?” the stallion stammered in confusion but tried to keep a smile on his face.
“Yeah, I think you’re cool.” she told him.
“Then why don’t w-,”
“Nope,” Pinkie interrupted with a smile again.
“What?”
“Sorry, but I can’t. I have Spike,” she told him as she looked away from him.
“Spike, what is he, your coltfriend?” The stallion asked as Pinkie grabbed her hands behind her back and started hopped a few steps away from him.
Spike’s mind went blank for a moment. His only reaction was to duck back behind the rocks and turn his back so he could lay his back against it.
*Separate into another paragraph* “Not exactly, you could say he’s my drakefriend,” she answered simply as she crouched down in the sand with her back to him, while she dragged her finger through the sand. “He’s always denying it and he’s a little naïve and a bit of a pervert with a big breast fetish, but he’s just embarrassed.”
Dammit, Pinkie Pi. You may be able to explain things well, but keep that stuff to yourself. Spike thought to himself.
“I don’t know what a drakefriend is but I’m better than that guy,” The stallion told her, “I’m rich and I’m good looking, right?”
“That doesn’t matter,” she said as she stood up, “I want Spike. He’s the only one I love.”
On the beach, the stallion was beside himself. He tightened his fist and grits his teeth until he finally calmed down. “I see,” he said as he came up behind Pinkie Pie, “If that’s the case, I’ll just make sure you never see him again.”
“I can’t, no; I won’t let nice, huge breasts like these go to someone else.” the stallion said as he slowly zeroed in on Pinkie, holding his hands up like a savage animal ready to pounce.
Pinkie looked and saw the guy getting closer and closer. She wanted to run, but her legs wouldn’t move. She wasn’t just scared, she was terrified. “No! Someone,” she cried as she tightly shut her eyes, letting tears stream down her face, “Spike!”
Just as the stallion was a couple of feet away from Pinkie, Spike landed between the two. The stallion stammered back a few steps; but before he stopped, Spike pulled his fist back and punched the stallion square in the face. He pushed the stallion back off his feet and sent him flying into the ocean.
Spike watched the stallion make a huge splash, and then gave a snort, causing green flames to shoot from his nostrils.
“S-Spike . . . you came? You came to save me?” she asked, her voice still sounding a little shaken up.
“Don’t sound so surprised,” he said sounding a little hurt as he averted his eyes and his cheeks started going red.
“Spike,” she sniffled trying to wipe the tears from her eyes, “Spike!”
“Spike . . .” Pinkie called to him, finally breaking the silence.
“Pinkie . . .” Spike said, stopping mid sentence and averting his eyes, “sorry, I . . .”
“Why are you apologizing? You saved me,” she smiled at him, which caused him to look back at her.
“Of course I did. You called for me, so naturally I’d come.”
In one quick motion, Pinkie closed the distance by planting her lips and tongue in Spike’s mouth.
“Spike, I love you!” Pinkie shrieked as Spike’s licking caused shivered to run down her spine, “I love you!”
“I love you too, Pinkie,” Spike said he pulled away and planted a kiss on her cheek.
“Yes, Spike, play with my chest more,” she pleaded. “You’re the only one allowed to touch my breasts.”
“Spike, I swear you’re like a baby sometimes,”
“What? Why’d you stop, I was so close,” she complained as she looked up at him.
“Don’t worry,” Spike said as he sat up on his knees and removed the rest of her bikini, revealing her dripping wet pussy, “I know how to make you feel even better.”
Spike then hauled Pinkie’s legs up bending them over her with her wet sex completely exposed to the drake. Just looking at it made Spike’s inner fire all the hotter as well as causing smoke to flow from his nostrils. Spike placed his hands on his side of her pussy, spreading it open as he lagged his tongue out and proceeded to eat her out.
*Separate into another paragraph* Pinkie moaned as her heart raced and Spike dug his tongue in as far as it would go, completely enjoying the pure sweet sugary taste of her juices. Pinkie felt Spike’s serpentine tongue writing around inside her as her walls tried to contract around it, clearly mistaking it for the one thing she was starting to crave. “Spike, I want my favorite popsicle now.” She told him.
Spike couldn’t take it anymore as he stood up. “Pinkie, I wanna put it in.”
“Yes,” she replied in a breathless tone, “I want it too. I want yours inside me, Spike.”
“Don’t tease now,” she told him. “Put it in. Hurry!”
“Spike . . .,” was all Pinkie could say as she let out a gasp soon after.
“Pinkie,” Spike groaned in a breathless tone. “You try moving too.”
She loved it; but more importantly, she loved Spike, knowing full well he was the only one who could make her feel this way. While Pinkie worked her magic, Spike couldn’t help but feel the inner fire make it all the way down south and slowly rising up again.
“Wow, Pinkie, it looks like your cunt’s trying to eat me,” he chuckled, breathing almost as hard as her.
“I bet,” Pinkie said as she hunched forward and placed her hands in front of her on the ground, trying to brace herself, still moving her hips and refusing to stop. “It’s because your dick’s hitting me so deep inside. It feels so good.”
“Spike, deeper,” she begged, “I want it deeper!”
“No problem,” he replied as he sat up and grabbed her chest.
Pinkie closed her eyes and simply let Spike indulge in his favorite pass time as he massaged her.
“Pinkie, I’m gonna cum,” he groaned, “I wanna cum inside you.”
“Cum inside!” she told him. “Fill me up! Give me lots of your cum!”
“I’m cumming!” he shouted, wrapping his arms around her as he felt the inner fire reached its limit and he felt his climax hit like an explosion.
“Wow . . . there’s so much,” Pinkie heaved as she and Spike came down from their high and rested in the sand.
“That’s because you told me too.” he breathlessly replied.
Pinkie then noticed that the whole time, Spike hadn’t even loosened their embrace. She wanted to say something, but didn’t want him to let so for once she remained silent. Pinkie shifted onto her side so she was lying on the sand next to him and looked into Spike’s eyes as she said, “Spike, I love you.”
“Me too,” he said.
Spike couldn’t help the smirk that stretched to the corner of his face. Holy Celestia, what have I gotten myself into with these mares?
You made off with my swimsuit and it can only be for one reason. Pinkie, Celestia help you, if you broke your promise and snuck off with Spike, I promise you won’t be walking right for a month, Rarity thought as she ran like her life depended on it.
Love that hot Pinkie/Spike beach sex scene. Nice tribute. Pinkie is just like Nao!