I would give anything to see Twilights reaction when she finds out that she has not only been with Applejack but Rarity and Pinkie Pie. And they all have an orgy in the dinning table, with Celestia walking in and she is like. "Room for one more?" With a sly smile. And then she joins, then Luna along with the cmc come in and join as well..best damn Summer ever!
Gnh. Didn't like the Appledash at all, not sure why that's necessary. Hell, wasn't particularly fond of this chapter as a whole. Didn't have the same feel to it as the previous three.
2043240 exactly... I think the auto-correct changed it without me noticing... and my dyslexia...
but still, I didn't think I had to point out that I never said that I didn't like the story or the author's work, I only had a problem with the fetish he wrote about (albeit briefly)
and for the record, there are no doubt people with testicle fetishes... (I know some have a fetish of removing them )
2043384 I can understand but it's in the show. Think of it this way, Fluttershy so flustered by Spike's dragonhood has started to have lewd fantasy, don't ask what it's about I give no spoilers.
So not only was Spike sleeping with both Rarity and Pinkie, he was sleeping with AJ behind BOTH of their backs as well. Don't think this is going to end well for him.
2043504 I know, and in my defense, I wrote that before reading that it was a fantasy... and even after reading, I still felt that I needed to express it I still love everything else about it... it's just that one scene holds my one disgust
Sorry to any who thought my tentacle scene for Fluttershy was a bit . . . lacking. I thought it was too, but I wasn't sure how to keep it at the same level as the rest. I'll try and go back and tinker with it, to try and make it better.
2044950 don't worry, it was better written than some other tentacle pony rape stories i've read in a long time. Plus, i could picture the whole scene in front of me, the sweat dripping from her body as she was covered in her own fluids, her suppressed urges rising as she lingers the feeling of relief. Wanting no needed to be filled up. In no control of her own body as she succumb's to her bodily needs, the insanity of her situation as she can no longer live without the feeling. Idea~
I really don't understand all the Appledash hate. It's the one ship that makes the most sense among any mane-six shipping. I'm not saying it's my favorite (though it's up there,) though it does make the most logical sense out of any pairing I've seen on the site. Maybe if someone didn't like for a ship to be so blatantly obvious and easy, but so many object to it? Really? This site is filled to the brim with TwiDash of all things which makes no sense whatsoever, and people are going to hate on a couple of athletic rivals hooking up?
My only complaints are not getting to see how all that went down; the Appledash, Spike hooking up with Applejack, and his initial hookup with Pinkie Pie and Rarity. I would say that the idea of AJ cheating on RD because she "needs cock" is demeaning toward her character and derogatory toward female/female relationships, but . . . eh. It's Resort Boin. Anything based on hentai is going to be chauvinistic.
She continued to moan in ecstasy and began to breathe harder as she felt the tentacles thrusting faster and harder inside her. After a few final thrusts, Fluttershy felt something hot and slimy shot out from the tentacles and poured into her mouth, pussy and ass. The tentacles then pulled themselves out of her, giving a final spurt and drenching her body in the hot, white liquid. Fluttershy was breathing heavily as the hot goo dripped all over her body. “T-This . . . this is cum. It’s washing into my womb,” She said in a breathless tone. “Oh dear, what if I get pregnant,” She said as she gave a hard swallow and passed out.
Here you go, everyone, Chapter five is up, enjoy.
HNNG, YES~
I would give anything to see Twilights reaction when she finds out that she has not only been with Applejack but Rarity and Pinkie Pie. And they all have an orgy in the dinning table, with Celestia walking in and she is like. "Room for one more?" With a sly smile. And then she joins, then Luna along with the cmc come in and join as well..best damn Summer ever!
YES!
I just have to say that the tentacle scene made me softer than runny pudding... I almost unfaved this fic because of that scene... just saying
But regardless of my personal preferences, it was another great chapter as always. Keep up the good work.
hoh mah, Detective Twilight is out, YOU'RE ALL SCREWED!
Gnh. Didn't like the Appledash at all, not sure why that's necessary. Hell, wasn't particularly fond of this chapter as a whole. Didn't have the same feel to it as the previous three.
Oh man...Spike you better start running bro! Because you are so bucked! Great chapter as always, can't wait for the next one!
Spike you're so toast.
2042447
Not cool bro, he put a lot of work into this.
need moar! need SpikeTwi. SpikeDash and SpikeShy NAOOOOOHHHH!!!!
2043107 I know... but testicles are my personal disgust (I forget the antonym for fetish)
2043135
You mean tentacles, not testicles right?
Never heard of a testicles fetish
2043240 exactly... I think the auto-correct changed it without me noticing... and my dyslexia...
but still, I didn't think I had to point out that I never said that I didn't like the story or the author's work, I only had a problem with the fetish he wrote about (albeit briefly)
and for the record, there are no doubt people with testicle fetishes... (I know some have a fetish of removing them )
2043384
I can understand but it's in the show. Think of it this way, Fluttershy so flustered by Spike's dragonhood has started to have lewd fantasy, don't ask what it's about I give no spoilers.
So not only was Spike sleeping with both Rarity and Pinkie, he was sleeping with AJ behind BOTH of their backs as well. Don't think this is going to end well for him.
2043504 I know, and in my defense, I wrote that before reading that it was a fantasy... and even after reading, I still felt that I needed to express it
I still love everything else about it... it's just that one scene holds my one disgust
2044652
No need bro, we all have that one scene.
Sorry to any who thought my tentacle scene for Fluttershy was a bit . . . lacking. I thought it was too, but I wasn't sure how to keep it at the same level as the rest. I'll try and go back and tinker with it, to try and make it better.
2044950
don't worry, it was better written than some other tentacle pony rape stories i've read in a long time. Plus, i could picture the whole scene in front of me, the sweat dripping from her body as she was covered in her own fluids, her suppressed urges rising as she lingers the feeling of relief. Wanting no needed to be filled up. In no control of her own body as she succumb's to her bodily needs, the insanity of her situation as she can no longer live without the feeling.
Idea~
This seems like its from resort boin boin
You know AJ, if you like that certain aspect of the male anatomy so darn much....why not ask Twilight to give RD one?
Or go straight.
Either way it's a win/win for ya.
Bronyman1995 is out, peace!
Nice though i do depise the pairing of appledash more than anything in this fandom good work since their really isnt any in this story
Everything was going great with this story until the Applejack and Rainbow Dasb shipping...I will just ignore that and move on.
2545015 same here i hate appledash it sucks but it wont get in the away with spike getting laid
IF THEY MAKE THIS AM MOVIE ILL BE LIKE WOO HOOOO YAY!
Three down, three to go.
I really don't understand all the Appledash hate. It's the one ship that makes the most sense among any mane-six shipping. I'm not saying it's my favorite (though it's up there,) though it does make the most logical sense out of any pairing I've seen on the site. Maybe if someone didn't like for a ship to be so blatantly obvious and easy, but so many object to it? Really? This site is filled to the brim with TwiDash of all things which makes no sense whatsoever, and people are going to hate on a couple of athletic rivals hooking up?
My only complaints are not getting to see how all that went down; the Appledash, Spike hooking up with Applejack, and his initial hookup with Pinkie Pie and Rarity. I would say that the idea of AJ cheating on RD because she "needs cock" is demeaning toward her character and derogatory toward female/female relationships, but . . . eh. It's Resort Boin. Anything based on hentai is going to be chauvinistic.
Yup, just when Spike's had a sweet time with AJ, he's busted when Twilight catches him in the mare's bathroom. Poor dragon, hang in there.
Also, I didn't know Rainbow Dash and Applejack were lovers in this story. That's actually pretty cute.
Not likely when such fluids come from a plant.