Zecora suddenly appeared:
"It is not ok, to swipe a potion without to pay!

Now you have to pay and bed me as bonus lay!"

*Rumble got milked dry that day*

The -end

please add “love potions” and Narcotics in descriptions

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Colt’s milk as many useful applications in potions!

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I made it in one of my stories lore

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Because Tea is awesome.

Thanks so much for writing this! We've all been there. Heh.

Rumble, you little rascal.

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You're welcome :)

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Done

I don't mind foalcon, quite the contrary, but this fic is all over the place with the writing style and setting. There's barely any descriptions of environments and it feels like a draft more than a finished story. It's almost all explaining and telling with very little showing of what the characters think, feel and sense. Typos abound, and I think it's quite egregious that even a chapter title has a spelling mistake. I suggest you go through the story again and add more detail, fluff, sensory descriptions and slow down the pace a bit. And if you don't want to work on a fic you already finished, maybe try those with your next story?

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Thank you for your feedback, spelling is a constant problem for me which I am trying to improve, though my mental disability hinders me in that regard. As for the pace and setting etc. I have no excuse for that, I'm capable of adding detail and while I may not do it for this story, I'll try to keep it in mind for future stories. I will fix the chapter title.