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AndyHunter


I'm not the DJ or the guy from EastEnders. I am the brony, skater and the fanfic character one.

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An experience is the best mother’s day gift

Very nice, dinky clop is rather rare. I hope though the german wont get you into trouble

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Thanks bro, I don't think the German is a problem, they're only in the description and the chapter title, plus I was listening to Rammstein while writing this story and I couldn't help myself. (And sometimes I watch MLP dubbed in Deutsch) :pinkiecrazy:

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Youre welcome, i was just unsure due to fim rules.

Dont let the dislikes get you

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Yes, I'm not going to lie to you, I was disappointed by the dislikes, I really tried hard and tried to make this story "perfect", I mean, detailed but not too detailed, realistic and maintain the essence of MLP without profanity.

I don't know if it's because of my tendency to overuse this trope in some of my stories Scenery Porn

Or the sex scene could have felt rushed, I don't know.

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Do you require a hug? Most dislikes are mainly haters, i experienced it myself

Comment posted by Deus Foalt deleted May 7th

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Nah, Is alright, I can live with it, thanks for your support anyway. :raritywink:

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i think you did rather well. my ever foalcon got victim of a anti pedo group.

Also, I made once a blackjack clop and currently working on a anhtro dinky, which both I hope wont backfire on me

Deus deleted his comment for a reason... I'm going to respond to you anyway if you read this, maybe this can explain my creative choices.

Sometimes when I write a story I always say to myself "How can I make it more unique and original?" And what happened was to give Dinky a British accent, since she doesn't have dialogues in the show, I decided to give her that accent, of course, for me it's impossible to know if I'm exaggerating or not, because first, I don't live in the UK, second , the internet is the only source I have to find out about things outside my country.

The accent was also to see what people thought, this is not the first time I add accents to my characters, in my Fallout Equestria story, the Zebras have a Patois accent, this takes me too much time, because I have to do too much research, I watched all of Little Jacob's scenes from GTA 4, multiple times to imitate the Patois accent in the most realistic way possible and also adapt some words to the world of MLP.

And it's really disappointing when you don't get feedback, so, I decided to implement some of my creative ideas in this story, giving Dinky a British accent, since my OC (Stardust Glitter) also has a British accent, I really want my characters to have different voices and a varied vocabulary to not repeat the same words over and over.

And with the flowery language you mention, maybe you see it that way, but I added that Dinky has a more formal way of speaking when she is with Derpy, the British people tend to be more formal, right? I guess I confused formality with flowery, I don't know.

I can't believe my creative idea is the main problem in this story, fucking shit bro.

But still, thanks for your comment, even if you deleted it.

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In Mona Lisa Overdrive, where my realistic Blackjack appears, there is also a kind of "clop" in chapter 7. It is a taboo topic (Watersports), so I don't know whether to tell you to read it, although it is an important scene for the story. (At first, I wrote it out of pure shock; I was considering strategies to get people more interested in my Fallout Equestria.) But that scene really has an impact on the story.

I'll read your story when I get the chance.

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i can tell you more in a pm if you want

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Sure, send me a PM.

I prefer the comments section to be about the story itself. :twilightsheepish:

... why do they fucking talk like that? it's super distracting, and takes me completely out of the story before I can even get the the good parts

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You mean Dinky's British accent? I already explained why I added it; I was just trying to be original and give her a unique voice. That's all. If you are so used to standard English and can't embrace originality, I suggest you to read another story.

What is with humanity's ever growing obsession with incest? :facehoof:

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It's just taste, mate, but I understand why you might not like it, I also think that incest is illegal in many countries, which can make it more unpleasant to see and read this type of content, but it's all fiction, so I think there's not problem.:twilightsheepish:

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It's not just you though. At least in America, it's becoming more and more mainstream. I don't want to live on this planet anymore. :pinkiesick:

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