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The main 7 decide to go on a camping trip for 2 night in the forest and they only expected fresh air and good time with friends. They didn't expected having to stop an illegual mining operation and magic that doesn't have Equestrian origin. A.N: I don't own anything except for the miners.
Cover made by PhysicRodrigo.

Story to be found on Fanfiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13703388/1/Equestria-Girls-Sunset-Tiger

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Comments ( 5 )

The biggest issue is that Twilught knows so much accurately. She should be guessing more. You are rushing too much. Good idea but needs refining

11870579
This idea was mostly one that came to mind and wanted to post it to get it out of my head. What aspects do you think I should refine this one, what should I do?

11870859
Have them not fully know all the conditions of Sunsets transformation that is the biggest thing. Plus maybe mention Wilight studied this kind of pictograph

11870579
I admit it was a rushed idea I admit, what other ideas can you help me with also?

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Not really since a just started story. That was the only glari g issue.

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