Twilight Sparkle is overworked and plagued with guilt over the fate of 'the mean three'. Meanwhile, Starlight Glimmer grapples with feelings that bubble to the surface at inopportune moments as well as a daunting new job, and Spike once again attempts to get closer to the mare of his dreams. Set some time after 'The Last Problem'.
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Here's a better idea! Why not make someone Twilight loves a princess? Like someone she would love to spend an eternity with? Usually when a princess marries another, they become Queen or empress, that would be an interesting story.
Anyways this story is interesting, I hope to see more.
Wrong, Gallus, its Twilight’s conscience is making her doubt her actions which is odd given how many years it finally reach Twilight.
Don’t say that garbage, Spike! You’re only saying that to protect the traitor who was the mastermind who brought them together and planned to used them as Twilight’s stepping stones to the throne.
No... its like... Family Guy’s earlier seasons, TV14
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Gotcha. Thanks. And thanks for reading too!
Good, otherwise this story would have been rated mature.
I think the rating should stay at Teen but maybe add a sex tag for suggestiveness.
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OK, thanks!
Lovely writing!!! Can't wait to see where this goes <3
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Thank you, you're very kind.
This is the first story I have read on this site where Twilight now patrols the dream realm, I'm a little surprised. I'm more surprised others haven't thought of the idea.
I mean she litterly takes the jobs of both Celestia and Luna now, it only makes sense she goes to the dream realm and stops nightmares from happening.
11867921 true I hope cozy glow will get reformed in this story maybe at the end of it i love it when cozy gets reformed and I agree with you both spike just don't want twilight to help them and gallus don't want twilight to get hurt but her not helping them is hurting her but good story so far
nice job on all chapters out
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Thank you very much!
Spike having a mental conversation with himself? Hilarious.
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Lol, thanks. I was pretty pleased with that bit.
No offense but I think the redemption will failed. I mean how many years have the Legion has been in stone? I mean Discord did say that he heard everything when he was petrified. Besides I mean they might heard about Twilight was going to reform them as some of the guards will take about how they deserved being turned to stone despite it was Discord who masterminded everything and yet, he gets away scot-free
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None taken. Well, we'll see. I'd be lying if I said I had everything planned out, I'm sure what happens will be as much of a surprise to me as to everyone else. Though I think it's less about the redemption, and more about the chance, something that Tirek and Cozy Glow at least, never got. Remember, Cozy Glow was thrown in Tartarus the second she was found out, small wonder she came back for a second try. And is what she did (attempt to remove magic from the world) really that different from what Starlight tried to do the first time around? Except on a larger scale? If Starlight can achieve redemption, why not Cozy Glow? In any case, it won't be an easy path. (And as to the Discord being able to hear and see everything while he was petrified thing, that may just be because he has literally god-like powers. We don't know that it's the same for everycreature else. Yet.)
Anyhoo, thanks for reading this far!
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I want to agree on that but since Discord did help out in turning those 3 to stone, he might made them head everything other say around them as revenge for stealing his magic and putting Fluttershy in a cell.