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cheesepuff


Just a guy who likes MLP

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This is an analysis of the famous background pony Ditzy Do, or more popularly known as "Derpy Hooves". This document explains why many of her more well known features are the way they are. Everything for how she got her cutie mark, to why she loves muffins are explained.

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This makes so much sense. Util her back-story is explained in cannon (if it ever will) I'll consider this as her back-story.

Hmm. Short, sweet, and full of errors.

I like the concept, and the way she got her cutie mark... Priceless. :rainbowlaugh:

But still. Several Grammar issues. Not really any issues with spelling. This is too short an essay to have spelling issues.The whole "Muffin Mare" Song need a revamp, in terms of capitalization. As well as taking a look at the many times you said "Derpys". Possessive or not?

Only things is could find wrong. Other than that, love it! I might just use this latter.... :twistnerd:

-The Librarian

:rainbowkiss: Derpy is a retard you know :3 no use really building up the fandom anymore tell they fix that voice.

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