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ToaofTwilightZ


Forgot what I was gonna say. Don't mind me. I'll just stand here and feel awkward.

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After a 1000 year wait, Turaga Vakama awakes from a vision that tells him Tahu and the five other toa will not be coming to rescue his island after all. As he goes to tell his villagers the terrible news, Vakama's captain of the guard tells him that Rainbow Dash, Toa of Loyalty, is already here, and is 20% cooler than the legends predicted. Vakama is skeptic about the new arrival, a creature the likes of which he's never seen before. Determined to prove Rainbow and her friends as frauds, Vakama pits the Mane 6 against the evil Makuta, master of shadows. Whether the magic of friendship can overcome this dark foe remains to be seen, as the battle for the fates of the Great Spirit and the equestians Princesses begins. (Note: This fic assumes little-to-no prior knowledge of the BIONICLE storyline. Every necessary detail will be explained as it comes up.)

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Comments ( 24 )

Good to see this back on the radar. Keep on keepin' on! We're still here, according to the stats page. :coolphoto:

2907580 The stats page is reassuring, but there's nothing like actual feedback from readers! Thankyou.

1405879 Well, the inhabitants of the Matoran Universe basically were robots, just robots with some organic components and varying levels of sentience. :twistnerd:

6432465 I might come back to it one day, but until then, I don't want people getting their hopes up. I'm not exactly the best at time management, been going through a rough time at college, etc, etc. Honestly, if I were gonna revive this sucker, I'd completely rewrite the point at the Kini Nui. I had only been a brony for, like, half a year at that point, and I can see looking back that while the original Toa Mata are a powderkeg looking for a spark, the Mane6 would not fight like that. I'd probably split them in teams of two. That said, I'm really flattered you took the time to read my drivel and watching you leave a comment on every chapter made my day!

6432543 I put the story in my track list, just in case.

I went and bought two of the new(ish) 2015 Bionicle sets: Kopaka, Master of Ice, as well as the protector of ice

I've only got two of the new sets myself. In my case I got Gali and the Protector of Water. I felt that wasn't the best name so I renamed the Protector Naho as a callback to G1. Then I named the two Skull Spiders they came with Bob and Steve.

The pictures you stick at the start of each chapter hit me right in the nostalgia. Also,

And significantly more d'awwws

More d'awws, indeed.

I've noticed some inconsistencies where there are bits of the old version that don't quite mesh with the new version. Still, nice work on the rebuild. Can't wait to read the Tarakava fight again.

that I had bounced right off the edge of the nest and all the readers are probably just skipping over this monologue and zoning out by now so hi readers that aren't paying attention! but I wasn’t falling

Pinkie, stop breaking the fourth wall. :facehoof:

6442087 If you notice some plot-holes, send me a pm and I can see about smoothing em over.

After just looking at the picture, I can hear the Po-Koro market.

God, I loved that game.

6452779 IKR? I still have the file that I downloaded from Lego.com in 2007. Granted, Windows 8 has a harder time with it than an older OS would, but it plays ok. Sometimes I turn on the german just for fun.

6452813 I downloaded that file too, but that was many dead hard drives ago.

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Pinkie, stop breaking the fourth wall. :facehoof:

Aw, but she's so good at it!

I got so happy when I read that Spike was going in and out of the lava. I forgot he had that ability. Hey! Didn't Kopaka have to get a mask that was in the middle of a lava flow once? Oh Spi-ike~ :moustache:

There are quite a few misplaced words here. But what really stood out to me was Applebloom's opening scene...

Her thoughts (and screams) were cut short as a buzzing noise and a yell preceded a sharp impact not Sweetie’s skull, but to her side.

You forgot to change that, bro.

Also, how come nopony noticed Pinkie Pie's new facial accessory?

6462189 Fixed.
As for Pinkie's mask, she took it off immediately after putting it on, I believe, storing it in hammerspace wherever it is she stores stuff.

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I have better ideas than you all the time, bro. That's why you'll live in my basement when I rule the world.

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The protectors have their own names, btw. But I like the idea of naming him Naho better.

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Hmmm, this is going well. Interesting how much we have in common between our two stories, with regards to which koro the EoH decided to ally with. Pinkie in Le-Koro, RD in Ta-Koro, FS in Ga-Koro... However, I had Twilight in Ko-Koro (wall of prophecy, plus ko-metru was a place of knowledge,) Rarity was in Po-Koro (only place with artistic inclinations) and AJ was with Onu-Koro (she's an earth pony, after all, and arguably the strongest/most level-headed of them all, like Onua.) Of course, Takua was also running around, and had presumably gotten most (if not all) of the side-quests done by the time things happened...

Can't wait to see more!

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Oh, hey, something I found out while perusing the various Bionicle wikis... Apparently, organic races (Agori, Glatorian, Ponies, etc...) are immune to mind-control via wearing a Krana (and possibly infected masks...?) because Krana work by "reprogramming" the mechanical bits of a given being. Of course, that's OG canon, not necessarily canon to this universe... Just saying.

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