a.k.a idealistic_romulan
Once upon a time, a young cadet at the Royal Guard Academy has been dreaming about the military glory of the olden days, when Equestria hasn't yet been a continent-spanning superpower.
He got very excited, when he found out that Princess Luna, the newly returned Alicorn Princess will be visiting the Academy on the Hearth's Warming Eve...
Written for AgentKorpsman for Jinglemas 2023
Warning: contains brief depictions of historical violence
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I loved it!
Nice one.
What is the difference between a good Alicorn character and a bad one? Same as with a Tolkien's elf and a D&D one.
One of them would have an ocean of experience. As in - anything that happens already has been experienced before. If you felt crushing loss or absolute joy not five times throughout your life but five hundred times, how different would those emotions be for you? How different would your reaction be?
Thought yourself unique? But they already met you a dozen times. Someone exactly like you, at least.
No mortal mind can exist for over three hundred years without changing into something different. Alien even.
And the other one of those two elves was designed to be 'relatable'.
I absolutely loved it! And this is better and exactly what I wanted to happen
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Thank you!
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Pretty much agree, except with alicorns I would compare them to Majars or even Ainurs
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. If that's OK, can I ask what exactly stood out for you the most in the story?
Thank you for this!
I love stories about the Sisters and their lives, be it long adventures or glimpses of their everyday life. This was a wonderful read, both with the world building and the way you depicted Luna.
This one's definitely going into my favorites!
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Thank you for giving this a read!
I too love Royal Sisters very much.
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That Luna actually connected/interacted with lower rank members of the guard instead of the higher ups and related to them that what I was manly looking for since she herself is a ruler but is also a soldier too she was just like that guard once too but realized that combat is not all what it seems to be.