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SabreTheRedMane


a.k.a idealistic_romulan

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A short slice of life story, featuring Marble Pie, Fluttershy and a clear winter day.
Written for Sonicsuns as a part of Jinglemas 2021 event.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Thank you. I liked Fluttershy's critters, and it's good to see Marble open up a little. =)

The description here was really good, especially at the beginning.

You painted a very vivid picture of both Marble's surrounding and her thoughts.

Things felt a little awkward with the addition of Fluttershy, but I couldn't say if that was due to the writing, or the awkward chemistry of two shy ponies interacting.

Either way, a delightful read all the same. Thanks for writing! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

That was a good story.

It's a shame they never got to meet in the actual show, because I bet Fluttershy and Marble would be best friends

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