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Thank you. I liked Fluttershy's critters, and it's good to see Marble open up a little. =)
The description here was really good, especially at the beginning.
You painted a very vivid picture of both Marble's surrounding and her thoughts.
Things felt a little awkward with the addition of Fluttershy, but I couldn't say if that was due to the writing, or the awkward chemistry of two shy ponies interacting.
Either way, a delightful read all the same. Thanks for writing!
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
That was a good story.
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Thanks!
It's a shame they never got to meet in the actual show, because I bet Fluttershy and Marble would be best friends