Wielding her gift of foresight, Celestia will do anything, even something completely unheard of, to secure the future of her little (only compared to her) ponies.
But in order to not hamper their will for self-improvement, she would influence things in a very careful and covert manner. Anything in the world can be her instrument in this chess game - eternal and complex, like life itself.
Even the Grand Galloping Gala.
Especially the Grand Galloping Gala.
12.12.2020: Tael_Spinner kindly agreed to edit the story and beat it in some more respectable shape. I simply cannot thank them enough for their help!
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Not bad at all. You might want to get some help with the grammar, though. There are a lot of errors. The fact that these errors are consistent leads me to conclude that English is not your first language. Thus, it is quite impressive that you managed to write as well as you did. Some of the errors could even be dismissed as artistic flourishes.
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Glad you liked the story!
Indeed English is not my native tongue. Also, I tried to get help in editor group before publishing, but to no avail. I would be very glad if somebody pointed out what mistakes they encounter in the text. Online spellcheckers can get one only so far.
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I could probably do it, but I do not have the time. My life has been very busy lately.
I’ll review it sometime today.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/448711/a-review-previous-best-night-ever
A review for you, fresh from the oven!
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Thank you very much!
Really unusual...
Spoiler warning! Celestia as both Great Spirit and living mare; using her abilities to read the souls of ponies... Yes, to read in their souls literally... And using magic to genetically engineer other alicorns... Little Twi, probably, Cadenza...
Equestria is rich with secrets - great ones, as written by DxD2, and small, but of great importance - here.
...we always felt that she was as mother to the Twily - and now we know why! :-))))
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Thanks for taking time to read and comment!
tfw russians speak with each other in english
На сторисе выложена русская версия, если интересно можете сравнить. Порой любопытно, как в разных языках по разному выражаются одни и те же мысли.
И, алсо, вы ж проспойлерили все сюжетные повороты.))))