Comments ( 7 )

Your story was a very good horror story but it could use some editing spaces in the sentences as it was confusing to read.

Merry Christmas!

11782798
Thank you so much for the review.
Yeah, I noticed I lack in this department.I'll try my best to edit the stories so they can be more coherent and easier to read.

I'm getting Sunny Town vibes here

11782815
You're very welcome. Good to hear, thank you. :twilightsmile:

What a great story! It's like the best bedtime story! Although the ending is not happy, but it is very touching.

11851171
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed the story :raritystarry:

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