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A horrible Fanfic Writer and a Twilight Enthusiast With a TF2 addiction.

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Machine ID: V1 (Modified Arm)
Location: Approaching Equestria
Current Objective: Find Blood For Repairs


Hell Is Empty.
Blood Is Drying.
Equestria Is Full.


have fun.


Tags and character tags are subject to change as the story evolves.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 7 )

This is a very nice and interesting story I wonder where it will go.

Also I found some mistakes:

V1 raises It's bulky red arm, a shockwave is let loose from 2 barrels ontop it's wrist. The various projectiles in the air immediately invert their trajectory, flying back at the barricade

The red arm is unable to parry.

V1 sits on the chair wiping the blood and charred metal of itself for it's next encounter.

It is stated that V1 absorbs blood thanks to their special armour plating.

Damn, Gabriel's death hurt

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Thanks for critiquing the story. I don't know how I forgot V1 absorbs blood, i'll make sure to change that up. Though I should add the red hand is actually able to deflect projectiles despite not being able to parry traditionally. For example shock waving a mind flayer's projectiles at it when it spawns the projectiles will insta-kill it.

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Finally I was stuck at the first mindflayer.

V1 crushes the heart's shriveled husk, and observes the once plentiful room now empty and coloured a deep red.

The world is your canvas, after all. Seems like V1 just took up its brush.

DIE! Thy end is now!
CRUSH! Prepare thyself.
WEAK!

Author's Note:
Yes, this is 100% shameless filler, did you really think I gave 2 random guards actual names for no reason? And if you want to know what steel sent then solve the morse yourself. Is this me being annoying? Yes, absolutely and I don't regret a single bit of it.

My initial guess was help but after translation it actually said: HELP .

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