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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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This story is a sequel to Fallen


They did it, the Elements of Harmony has finally worked and is powering up the machine against humanity’s invasion. However, an unexpected malfunction stops it as the portal opens, something else appears before them. In their conversation excuses and fight, the mysterious being had enough and punishes the Equestrians by banishing them all to a new with a set of changes & appearances. What new challenges waits for the pony invaders? What of the former element bearers? Can any of them ever seek redemption, after invading Earth and converting humans into ponies by their own princess who didn’t let go of her dark past? Find out now as they must work together once again from an even larger threat looming over the new world.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Just hope that Celestia suffers and finally die. NO redemption whatsoever!

Okay, quick question: It's been mentioned in the latter part of this chapter that Flutters is dead.
How can that be when Discord told her that neither she nor the girls would die?
So I'm wondering if she's REALLY dead, or just unconscious.
I'm hoping it's the latter, if only for Martin and the girls' sakes.

Looking forward to the next chapter, and what's gonna happen going forward.

This is an interesting start. I wonder whither it will go.

Will this ever be continued?

11561082 I'm hoping so, but I guess that we'll just have to wait and see.

Where does trixie fit in all this?

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