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This story is a sequel to Empress Cozy Glow


Okay, so I conquered Equestria, imprisoned the Mane Six and princesses in Tartarus, and ascended to become the new Empress of Friendship, right? Well, that was about eight months ago... Well, six months ago, I found the gem that changed my life... It is purple and has six sides, and about five or six hoof-fulls, I'd say? It's called the Guardian Amethyst and it called to me. I'm still not sure, I understand it, but I somehow just felt like I should go into that cave... That's where I found it on the stone floor... I don't know how long I stared at it, but eventually, it began to glow and spark... I don't know what it was in my mind, but I just somehow felt better and accepted just then?

I now understand that when I left that cave, I left a changed pony... And it wasn't just the new horn on my head or the fact that I now had magick for the first time in my life, but there was something else... I'll admit, being the only pony with magick in Equestria was a lot like being in Tartarus again! I remembered how the other ponies would stare at me... I couldn't explain it then, but I just felt like I had to get magick back! I had no idea how I was going to do that, though?

Eventually, I discovered that there was another artifact that would let me get into Tartarus... It was called the Staff of Opening, although it disappeared immediately after I used it! I somehow felt like I should go in there though. I needed to understand the other ponies and why they were upset with me and I knew that there was at least one pony who'd have a pretty good idea... I'll admit, Twilight Sparkle's friends were very upset when I told them that I would only take her. After all! I'm still evil! I'm a baddie! A villain! I couldn't just, let them all go, r-right?

Well, two months ago, I gave a kidney transplant to a filly in need... And that's when I realized that I had been changing! I asked Twilight Sparkle, my new assistant about it, and she helped me begin to understand that about myself... I wasn't the same filly... After having a nightmare, I began to realize that I had begun to see Twilight as not just my assistant, but as something else entirely... Something I haven't had since long ago... I saw her as my mother... You know, that was really hard for me to admit to her?

Then, an annoying draconequus showed up and used his power to free the Mane Six and the other princesses, by my command! While I'm not sure if he's really gone or not, I'll admit that made things very convenient to wrap up! But are things ever that convenient?

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Was not expecting to see this get a continuation yet, but it's a welcome surprise.

Though I have to say, Twilight seems kind of... off here. With how overly affectionate and forgiving she's being. And towards the end, it seems almost like she had this all planned out. Which combined with how well everything seems to be going for Cozy Glow... it's starting make me question this whole situation.

I do have some hunch as to where this might be going. Though to be fair, it's kind of a hunch I always get in a Cozy Glow fic things seem a bit too good to be true. But still...

You done it now Cozy, and it to late to run. For Twilight already got you.

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This is Twilight we're talking about. Of course, she planned this out. She learned to be an alicorn chess master from Celestia remember.

Good to see Cozy getting some proper friendship lessons and bonding with The CMC. Even if it did lead to her breaking her legs. Also, it's nice to see Twilight being a bit more firm with Cozy here and not completely subservient to her like she was in the first story

One little nitpick, you called Scootaloo red early in the story. I've always seen her as more orange than red. So it kind of through me off at first and I didn't initially know who this filly was supposed to be.

But aside from that, I really liked this chapter.

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I also had a similar flash about Scoots' appearance here. What I saw in my mind was Tempest Shadow, which totally confused me. Perhaps the author should have shown Scoots and named her, thus avoiding any confusion.

Honestly, I truly am no fan of Cozy. However, this story has held my interest, just to discover how long it will be before Cozy becomes fully reformed. :moustache:

Have to say, the opening kind of caught me off guard and got me thinking the story was actually going somewhere I thought it could but kind of doubted, till Cozy woke up. And I realized it was just a nightmare (or was it?).

It seems Cozy Glow and Discord or going to be doing some bonding. That be neat. Though I have to wonder if Discord's line about "every time I meet you in a different dimension" was just a cheeky joke or a potential plot point.

Also, it's nice to see Cozy's mother's influence rubbing off on her. Honestly, I think it's a better direction than the show just treating her as another of Twilight and company's enemies after revealing she's evil. Actually have Twilight try taking Cozy under her wing and trying to help her student when she sees she's gone down a bad path.

Ok, was not expecting the random Snickers commercials reference.

Sorry to hear you've apparently gone through your old home burning down. Though I'm glad you seem to have gotten past it.

Though wondering what more there is to Cozy's backstory here? What caused the fire?

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Is it a simulation of what Cozy wants deep in her heart made by the purple gem she found? And I take from her mind the female who is most likely to take the role for her? The Mane Six minus Twilight are ruled out because they don't meet Cozy's standards, and he trusts almost nothing in well-known princesses

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Something like that. Though more along the lines of this all being simulation created by Twilight . Maybe in reality, Cozy Glow was defeated just like in canon, but Twilight's experimenting to see if she can be reformed if she had a happy life and a mother that loved her unconditionally. Hence my comment about her seeming like she planned this all out.

Also, Cozy just happened to stumble upon a crystal after she had won, that not only turned her into an alicorn, but brought out the inner good in. (Which Twilight herself reveals.) And also this crystal just happens to be purple of all colors...

Though again that's just my theory.

My body bursts out of the blankets as I throw all four of my hooves out and force the other pegasus to back off! “Alright, fine! We can play! Uh, after coffee!” I say before suddenly wondering if I have a new addiction? *

You're not the only one Cozy, it's okay.

In fact as someone that can drink two big cups of coffee, (even on summer.) i think you're okay (lol.)

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Of course, Twilight planned this out. This is Twilight Sparkle we are talking about. How much of this, if any, is real is another story methinks.

Well, we got Cozyloo and Scoota-Glow! And just for fun, Discord also decided to include Apple Belle and Sweetie Bloom into the pack...

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