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Demon Shimmer


I write stories with and am Best Friends with GamerTwilight :P (I am also known as my pony OC Fallen Dusk)

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A short one-shot with snippets of story and elements of a darker AU based around if Demon Shimmer hadn't been defeated and dumb magic rules I made up just for this exact AU were in play.

Written during the Iron Author Writing 2023 Competition. The one I submitted for the competition lacked all my funny italics because I had to paste it in from libreOffice haha. (I have since realized I should have pasted in the chapter here first and then into the competition, but c'est la vie).

Feedback/Critique greatly appreciated! (see Author's Note at the end of the work :twilightsmile:)

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Comments ( 18 )

Imagine getting displaced here.

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HOW DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THE DISPLACEMENT THING :rainbowderp:

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It’s a trend. There’s even a group for it.

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Wacky wacky!
The whole reason there's a Twilight Sparkle here when in parts of the story it mentions mannnny years of difference is because that Twilight is displaced into this universe. There's a background to how and why that isn't unique to her, though I probably shouldn't get into all that in a comment haha.

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Ohh. I thought she was just sci-two from the human world.

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Ahh, nah. I mean, she is a human Twilight, but not from the canon world. Of course, there's room to change that, as the AU has a few variations. But over all it's not planned to actually be our Sci-Twi haha:twilightsheepish:

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Ohh. So she’s from the real world but got displaced as sci-twi.

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Not from our real world. Just some other Alternate Universe of the Equestria/Girls world, that is different from the one she is in with Demon Shimmer here:twilightsmile:

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Oh ok. Does that still count as a displaced?

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I'd think so? Since it's still someone getting displaced from their own world/universe into another.

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I thought they had to be from the real world.

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Eh, no clue what the trope calls for. It's still getting displaced

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Sunset nodded, her gaze shifting downward. "It is. But it's a necessary arrangement for fnaf survival, both for me and for them. I try to maintain a balance between our worlds, but it's a delicate one."

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