Through clouded eyes, it dims so dark
With each breath heavy, she need not speak
A weight upon her soul so could not move
Burden by duty, the princess could not move.
Yet cocooned, she did not know
Lost in dreams, in a green goop
Far from rescue, she remains subdued
Celestia, locked away, silently subdued.
Created for the Thousand Words II contest in the "Horror" category.
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I was there.
This was pretty creepy alright, loved the imagery you used throughout. And the ending feels... vaguely optimistic? Given the imagery present and the apparent mental fuckery, there's a layer of dubiousness on top of that, though, which in a way makes it even more striking.
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Yeah, I do admit that the way the story ended seemed a little odd. Originally, i was aiming for it to turn out a little... Darker, but after writing for a little while I had realised that the ending might've been too generic. And so I wanted a twist in the story, with Celestia doing something different… Only to realise that I just didn't have enough words left to keep the story to just 1k words. So, I kept thinking and thinking, might've overthink, I ended up coming to this as a conclusion for my story.
Also, thanks for reading!
Nice story you got there. It gradually became more nightmarish before dawn finally broke.
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me, also, Fire
great work Fleety
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i agrees with me!
thanks for letting me preread!
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*Boops*
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Yep! Thanks for your support Doodles!
oof, what happened to Canterlot Castle?
and oof, what horrific decay!
ooh, seems like a Celestia that has been sucked into madness and sunk cost
ooh, or trapped in an illusion while encased in a Chryssy egg this whole time?
and aww! a happy ending, and a neat look at just what dreams Celestia dreamed during her capture. an awful one, and a very fitting nightmare for the eternal monarch. thank you for writing!
Fascinating, but I wouldn’t really call it horror per se. Still, great imagery as the dreamscape decays and Celestia presses on. She endured a thousand years alone for her sister, after all. What’s a few days in a feeding cocoon? (Or weeks, months… It’s still no comparison.)
All told, great character piece. Thank you for it.
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