After being rejected and neglected by your bestest friend over some stuck up windbag who trashed on your beliefs, you’d think to ditch them. Starlight didn’t work like that.
I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.
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Awww! It’s adorable! I like your writing style! Followed!
Nice to see more stories about the shadow play episode. Good work
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It’s my favorite plot bunny to play with. It was so awful yet so forgivable that I can make so many stories about it.
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I love Starlight sm. That episode had me PISSED
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Oh really? How so?
I feel like the canon of the series really stifles your creativity sometimes.
For example, I was all in excited and we got the regret over movie and shadow play and blah blah blah.
I like your sweet stuff, it's really heart warming, but the recollection of transgressions from the show can get a bit tedious.
Still, a decent one shot.
so true
but she needed to do that for the movie to happen!
so true actually
aww!
loved how sweet this was! and it’s usually Starlight who is the one in the relationship dealing with feelings of guilt and self-worth, so it’s interesting to see that reversed here with the times in the canon that Twilight unlearned her previous lessons and did her friends wrong. thank you for writing!
I’m normally not one for color-coded dialogue, but it is an effective way to attribute dialogue without burning word count. On the other hand, the character voices were distinct enough that you could’ve pulled it off without bothering.
Rarely a good sign there. It’s one step removed from the characters realizing that the author’s doing the equivalent of pushing two dolls together and saying “Now kiss.”
”Even when you trapped me in your village’s propaganda hut?”
“I have issues, Twilight, this shouldn’t be news.”
You spent so much time going over canon events that you almost no time left for why Starlight fell for Twilight, and none at all for the other way around. And this is one that really needs some mutual justification to keep it from feeling like Starlight falling for her teacher, or worse, her parole officer. Really, any romance for a couple not already established by canon is a poor choice for this context; the need to justify the choice eats most of the needed word count. Sorry, but this just fell flat for me.
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Yeah… I gotta rely on fanon more often. Thanks for the advice.
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To be clear, there's nothing wrong with original pairings in a vacuum. It's just that when you have so little space to work with, it's better to go with something where the foundation is already in place.