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Starlight Fan


I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.

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After being rejected and neglected by your bestest friend over some stuck up windbag who trashed on your beliefs, you’d think to ditch them. Starlight didn’t work like that.

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Awww! It’s adorable! I like your writing style! Followed!

Nice to see more stories about the shadow play episode. Good work

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It’s my favorite plot bunny to play with. It was so awful yet so forgivable that I can make so many stories about it.

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I love Starlight sm. That episode had me PISSED

I feel like the canon of the series really stifles your creativity sometimes.

For example, I was all in excited and we got the regret over movie and shadow play and blah blah blah.

I like your sweet stuff, it's really heart warming, but the recollection of transgressions from the show can get a bit tedious.

Still, a decent one shot.

Twilight took a glance at the sunset at her balcony, it was a very pretty sight but not as beautiful as the pony next to her, Starlight Glimmer.

so true

After all, in the Storm King invasion, she didn’t place enough trust in her friends and that caused a rift between them because she was careless enough to steal from another kingdom and hot headed enough to drive her friends away.

but she needed to do that for the movie to happen!

Even when Starswirl spat on the stance of redemption with “Once a villain, always a villain,” even when Starlight left the library crying at the thought if things played out differently she might not have gotten her second chance, Twilight never thought to interfere because she was so obsessed with idolizing Starswirl. Not until it was almost too late to save Stygian from his inner darkness.

so true actually

“I’ll never stop loving you either Starlight.” Twilight finally embraced her lover, happily letting a tear glide from her face.

aww! 


loved how sweet this was! and it’s usually Starlight who is the one in the relationship dealing with feelings of guilt and self-worth, so it’s interesting to see that reversed here with the times in the canon that Twilight unlearned her previous lessons and did her friends wrong. thank you for writing!

I’m normally not one for color-coded dialogue, but it is an effective way to attribute dialogue without burning word count. On the other hand, the character voices were distinct enough that you could’ve pulled it off without bothering.

She had no idea why she had said yes to being Starlight’s girlfriend, it felt so right at the time.

Rarely a good sign there. It’s one step removed from the characters realizing that the author’s doing the equivalent of pushing two dolls together and saying “Now kiss.”

I always loved you, I’ve never stopped and I never will no matter what.

”Even when you trapped me in your village’s propaganda hut?”
“I have issues, Twilight, this shouldn’t be news.”

You spent so much time going over canon events that you almost no time left for why Starlight fell for Twilight, and none at all for the other way around. And this is one that really needs some mutual justification to keep it from feeling like Starlight falling for her teacher, or worse, her parole officer. Really, any romance for a couple not already established by canon is a poor choice for this context; the need to justify the choice eats most of the needed word count. Sorry, but this just fell flat for me.

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Yeah… I gotta rely on fanon more often. Thanks for the advice.

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To be clear, there's nothing wrong with original pairings in a vacuum. It's just that when you have so little space to work with, it's better to go with something where the foundation is already in place.

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