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great work on story
I suggest you employ a proofreader. The number of misspellings, punctuation errors and grammatical mistakes is far too many to list.
That aside: I enjoyed the concept.
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Used to have one but he hasn't been on the site in over a year. I try to proof read over these best I can but I will start looking again.