• Member Since 14th Jan, 2017
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iamgoku


Comments ( 9 )

Well now, that's a fun story, well detailed, with good use of both POVs to set a scene, and descriptions of the physical and emotional stuff going on. Good work author person.

You can clearly see all the "very intelligent" people that down voted the story because it's not their thing, instead of just ignoring it

Great work on the story

11557753
That’s the way the world is :(

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Hi, thank you for your comment. I appreciate your feedback.

I wanted to show the two POV's and the leadup to the reveal/awareness. Glad you liked the descriptions and emotional aspects there.

11557753
I've seen this before on stories that have similar themes to this which deal with size-difference/micro and macro character interaction, as well as M/M related stories as well.

Where downvotes are just heaped onto them and it's obvious most of them didn't read the story.

Thank you for your comment :) Glad you enjoyed the story.

Just wondering,
Do you plan to continue this or…

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I have ideas for a follow up, yes.

:raritywink:

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Are you going to write more :)

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.... I already said I was....

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