Nine hundred and ninety years after his self-imposed exile, Garland must once again take up arms to protect the homeland he loves so dearly.
As Nightmare Moon returns to Equestria, he faces the task of bringing together four heroes spoken of only in myth in order to stop her once and for all. Little does he know, things aren't always as they seem.
Things take a turn for the worst when the mare escapes from the castle deep within the Everfree, leaving Garland and his small brigade to track her down in an attempt to banish the corruption from Princess Luna's heart for good.
Can Garland and his crew of Light Warriors vanquish evil for good, or will they fall to eternal darkness in this definitive version of Lunar Plight?
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I will watch your career with great interest.
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I thought I got a comment, but it was you, Dio!
Jokes aside, I appreciate it. I got a few ideas.
I wish you the best of luck for ya story, net! Redoing a story is difficult.
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Yeah, I had to catch myself back kept almost rehashing ideas from the the original that I wanted to scrap.
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Just remember to be careful with the cross-overs. People hate it when if it happens too soon or too many, or worse the cross-overs with other Displaced serve no purpose for the story.
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I actually plan to avoid crossovers altogether for this version. Reason being that I have a TON of potential sequel ideas and I don't want to overbloat the story further. Crossovers may happen eventually, but it'll be selective, and will most likely cover areas I don't plan on covering such as Equestria Girls or G5.
Crossovers for the original version? yeah sure if i ever actually go back and finish it lmfao. That one is in a weird place right now. I want to finish it for the sake of finishing it, but it's redundant. This is a better version of it that just so happened to be different enough to turn into a separate story, and I honestly don't think anyone would want to read the original over this one.
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As long whoever you pick will have a positive impact on the three important aspects: character growth (but not too much too fast), story progression, and world building.
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That's party why I'm avoiding it. With how the story is structured, it may end up being a multipart series that could potentially span one story per season of the show. I don't plan on taking it that far, but give me ten years and I might lmao.
I'd love to work on a crossover at some point, but it's gonna be a while. That's probably gonna be saved for Equestria Girls honestly.
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I meant when you said "Crossovers may happen eventually, but it'll be selective,"
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Ah lmao. Sorry, was half asleep when I responded.
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So was I when I replied. XD
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I am half asleep now as I'm replying to your reply!
I should go to sleep LMFAOOOO
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Go to sleeeeep, recharge ya writer's juice!