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I'm just a guy who likes to make music, write occasionally, and watch a television show about ponies :D

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Harmony, a cryogenically frozen forerunner of the pony race, is found deep within an ancient science lab on the western front of Equestria, Twilight is recruited to investigate the lab, and in doing so deactivates the pod found within, allowing for Harmony to live once more in an all-new world as she struggles to find her way around. Little does Twilight know, the pony she released may just end up being the key to saving one of the most tragic events Equestria will ever see.

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This looks interesting and promising.

Just a little tip for the future, it's a good writing rule of thumb to start a new paragraph whenever the focus shifts from one character to another, or whenever another character starts speaking.

If that tragic event causes G5 to happened? Then hopefully, this Harmony fellow will prevent the three tribe separation, and stop the disappearance of the many, many non-pony kingdoms.

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Oh yeah! Thanks for reminding me!

Well, Twilight and Pinkie best hope Harmony doesn't see them as threats. :twilightoops:

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