Everyone's favorite couple at Canterlot High hits it's biweekly rough patch when Rainbow doesn't stop when Applejack asks her to.
This all comes to a head when Applejack gets fed up with Her girlfriend's lack of respect and sequesters herself in a camp that promises to teach Her how to say no.
The girl's of Canterlot High with the help of Twilight's sister in law Cadence quickly discover that there is something much more sinister below the surface.
In the end the couple learn to respect each other's wishes when to it comes to physicality, and that Fluttershy is an absolute freak in the sheets.
This fic contains references to sex, but is in no way explicit, nor does it describe in any detail any sexual act. This is not a porn fiction.
Chapters (11)
I'm curious to see where this goes.
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Spoiler warning!
In a circle.
Hmm, very peculiar yet very interesting story.
Can't wait to see how this story progresses.
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As most relationships do. Now if you'll excuse me looks like I have a new chapter to read.
I can't help but to think that Rainbow is going to misinterpret this.
Rainbow really needs to learn to slow down when it comes to others. Considering every time it one step forward two steps back.
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Don't worry, she learns her lesson. . . The fun way.
Dun dun duuuuuuuun. No, but as long as it's not a conversion camp I guess.
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I mean it basically is.
I'm a strong believer that jokes are just that, jokes, and should always be taken with a spoon full of sugar. But still, time and place Rainbow. Not to say I wouldn't have made a very similar joke in the situation. I mean come on, it's a very unique situation so when else are you ever going to make the joke.
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Yes, she was overconfident with the success of the previous joke landing so well. It was indeed, the biggest of oofs!
Cadence should really become a relationship counselor. She would have solved this problem before it got to this point. Rainbow needs to understand that some things can't be rushed and Applejack needs to understand that Rainbow means well she just has no patience for anything and needs to actually talk with her.
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Oh don't you worry. She'll learn. In the fun way.
Well i didn't get it right exactly, but I think it's the same thing in spirit. This could be a very satisfying villain to see defeated.
Please tell me Zephyr Breeze is at that camp too, and he is dumbfounded when he learns why Rainbow is there.
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. . . NO! OF COURSE NOT! BECAUSE THAT WOULD'VE BEEN BRILLIANT!!! damnit
Finally got around to finishing this. While i did like the last few chapters, I'm sorry but Cadance and Shiny stole the show here. Their every line and action was pure gold and they made the absurd climax possible.
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Why does that make you sorry?
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Some might not be happy to know side characters were the most entertaining part of their narrative. It didn't weaken the story though. As i said, their inclusion and slightly over the top antics are what make the climax feel possible in an otherwise very grounded story. I loved the characterization of Shiny especially. He's not going to avoid battle just because he has a baby, obviously he just needs to battle prep the baby. Amazingly on character while still being absurd.
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I'm glad you enjoyed.