In a game of divine chess, how much does the life and well-being of one pawn matter? In an age of war, magic, and Divine Lords, can even the lowest of Orphans rise to divinity and seize of place in history for themselves? Or, like Icarus, will the Elven Mage Sunset Shimmer plummet into the endless abyss, her wings burnt away by the fires of her ambition?
Interesting concept you got here, liking the set up you are doing for Twilight and the idea of her using Time Magic. Looking forward to more.
Reading the description, the idea sounds interesting. However, it sounds dangerously grand for a first story. Do you have prior writing experience?
Die = dice singular, dye is a pigment used to color things.
The main characters are finally in place.
Thanks for the thumbs up my brilliant reader; the more thumbs up the faster the chapters will come out.
Some of the walls could probably do with some breaking up, but otherwise pretty fun chapter.
Why isn’t there an alternate universe tag?
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I will add that tag.
Any comments?
wow, if that denotes being a story that seeks to be serious
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What do you mean by that? Sorry, I don't know if I understood you correctly.
Any comments?
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