-A lantern lit with flame of green
-Held by cloaked figure wanting to be seen
-He is a legend from days of old
-in every land this story be told
-he once decided to live a life
-the memories still cause him strife
-he has survived for five century
-and what he has seen makes him flee
-but he tempts fate again
-ignoring his previous plan
-when he decides to stop running
-the memories still haunting
(rated teen to be safe, story is partially memory based, so there will be many flashbacks. Which also where the romance takes place.)
Chapters (6)
Dearest reader
Those who are looking for a fast paced story, look elsewhere. This story is partially based off of older writing styles. Such as those written in the 1800's through early 1900's,therefore not fast paced, not much action. It will however have these but will not focus on them. This story is focusing around the developement of the character, coping with his past et cetera. Just figured I should give a warning, even if a little late getting in. I just didn't feel like writing a paragraph about how this story will be paced in the description. I hope all who read this will enjoy it.
sincerely
Impossiblebrony
It is an interesting story. I shall continue to watch it. As long as it's never a boring read i'll continue. I don't mean high paced action, just not a complete droll. But you already know this.
An interesting concept. I'll stick around to see where you take this. My one critique so far is that there are several grammatical errors as well as a few places where there appear to be missing words.
If you do find errors, feel free to post them in a quote so that I may correct them.
I would very much like to see this continue. The writing is good and The current plot is interesting.
Writing has resumed.
Expect a chapter in the next couple of days.
Why does this chapter have more views than the previous?
Edit:now there are seven more views to this chapter than the previous, why would someone skip chapters?
I must apologize for the long wait for this chapter, I am going to be moving soon. and combined with my schoolwork I have had little time to write.