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ImpossibleReflection


I enjoy making entire worlds from the ground up. I don't create to give people morals, or subtle political opinions, I create to give experiences people would otherwise not have.

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This story is a sequel to To Disappear


Rainbow Dash must teach her newly adopted 'sister' how to fly, however difficulties and painful memories obscure the course.

-Reading the Prequel is not strictly necessary to understand this, but it's a quick read.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 35 )

:pinkiegasp: dat ending and good chapter

And there's probably one of the few things that will make rd totally not want to be a wonderbolt

This was really good! I can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

4249384 Very true. I hope she confronts Spitfire.

Oh boy!! Please continue!!
I just read your previous story last night, this one looks just as good or better, we'll see!!

Comment posted by ImpossibleReflection deleted Apr 18th, 2014

I have to admit,I did not see that coming:pinkiegasp:

Wow... Now that is something! I can't wait to read more, so have my like and fav ^^

Go to Twilight, Dash! Twilight can help you!

Oh man this is getting good. I can't wait for rainbow dash and/or scootaloo to see spitfire. Need more chapters ASAP!

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Yea I mean don't ya think they would have someone in the magic department trying to make medical spells?- Trying to make a awesome Equestria even better for the inhabitants?

By the way, I liked the prequel and this too, your very talented at writing.

4265209 Twilight can hollow out her bones or something. That might work actually.

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I know right!

But seriously good work writing man.
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(⌐■_■) GOOD WORK.
(soo sorry, usein an phone, so no pony faces)

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You aren't going to influence the story, keep that in mind. I already have it planned out. Thank you, however, for the input.

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Actually that Idea helped me move the story along, just maybe not in the way you expect.

Okay Spits you got a shit ton of explaining to do you little nag.:twilightangry2::flutterrage::ajbemused::pinkiecrazy:

hmm i feel like something might happen with spitfire she might go.... insane that is my guess :rainbowdetermined2::scootangel:

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I honestly didn't mean to, I just always forget about magic.

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The whole twilight chapter was going to happen anyway, your comments just made me change chapter order. Which is how it was made easier.

Awesome! So many feels! Can't wait for more!

Awesome! Keep up the fabulous work! I can't wait for more

:scootangel: :rainbowlaugh: Want more Scoots and Dashie plz :) also interested how Discord will help, :rainbowderp: tho I have a feeling Flutters will be one to tell him.

So Scootaloo has a metabolic bone disease? Maybe it will be easier to cure than they think.

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not to rain on your parade, but hollowing out bones would be extremely difficult, this isn't making someone taller by breaking and setting bones, this would be attempting to hollow them without damage.

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Oh I get that, but most metabolic bone diseases can be cured by fixing whatever causes it.

Let's just say that Scootaloo's body is producing a hormone that causes her bones to grow more than normal, making them solid. Due to the fact that she is still growing (as I assume a filly would), here is a possibility that they can fix the hormone problem through medicine or some form or surgery, causing her to grow out of her bone problem. The end result could be her being more like Fluttershy.

Of course all of this is theoretical, and even if they cured the cause of the problem, Scootaloo may be stuck with solid bones. I was just saying that there may be an easier fix than some would originally think.

Oh dear. Dashie's gonna wreck her idol.

"Local Hero Adopts Orphan." If they publicize my life anymore I might have to start kicking journalists.

Hey, now, Dashie, at least you got a positive headline. They could just as easily have gone negative. "Local aerial nap-a-holic adopts flightless filly" would be more worthy of a good kick or three dozen.

...aww, no more chapters?

Rainbow Dash’s posture straightened as a realization hit her. Twilight is good at magic. She can fix it.

Even if Twilight can't fix the problem with Scootaloo's bones, BOTH of the princesses, AND Discord, owe you, Rainbow Dash, which means that you have two millenia old goddesses that could probably fix Scootaloo's bones, AND one Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony that could probably fix Scootaloo's bones. Besides which, Discord likes Scootaloo! Like, not "like like" because that would be weird, but based on the first story in this series, where he went sorta out of his way to help her get a better life than the one that she already had, I'm pretty sure that if you were to compile a list of Discord's favorite ponies in this universe, it would go as follows: 1: Fluttershy/Celestia/Luna 2: Scootaloo 3: Twilight Sparkle (fun to make fun of), etc. Huh. Well, Twilight still doesn't have the all-mighty Canterlot Library at her disposal, so it's still a fair bet that Celestia and Luna could help. Besides which, Celestia and Luna would know more about the physical condition of being an Alicorn, and if being an Alicorn makes it so that the pony in question has solid bones like an Earth Pony does.

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Besides which, Celestia and Luna would know more about the physical condition of being an Alicorn, and if being an Alicorn makes it so that the pony in question has solid bones like an Earth Pony does.

being an Alicorn

Yes! Scoots is BEST Alicorn! :scootangel:

"Wait, Spitfires your mother?!" Dash asked incredulously.

"Shrew her, amma gonsh kick her shlank sha-ard..." She degraded into mumbles.

"Who?" Fleetfoot asked, uncertainty visible behind her eyes.

"Raybow Shass!"

I'm sad that the author of this story hasn't been online in a little under two years. Anyways, for how this fight would go down, I like to imagine it going down like either one of these two fights, depending on your preference:
with Rainbow Dash taking the place of Batman
OR
With Rainbow Dash taking the place of The Flash

booze does that to ya, I just had one drink of it but satill

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