Equestria Girls: Ragnarök

Thunder Ace is a new student in Canterlot High, but there’s something off about him. It’s been almost a year since the Fall Formal and some things can’t be forgotten if you know what I mean. Now he is here not for a fight, he is here to reclaim what is his… The Hammer of Thorn.

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Chapter 1: Thunder Ace · 27th Nov 2022 · 1,752 words
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Waspinator331

Waspinator331 #1 · Nov 27th, 2022 · · · Chapter 1: Thunder Ace ·

Are we talking about marvel Thor?

The_Harmony_Titan

The_Harmony_Titan #2 · Nov 27th, 2022 · 2 · · Chapter 1: Thunder Ace ·

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This may be the actual Norse Mythology Thor and not the Marvel version. Though it may have bits of Marvel and God of War Ragnarök's Thor.

SUPERETHAN2

SUPERETHAN2 #3 · Nov 27th, 2022 · 2 · 1 · Chapter 1: Thunder Ace ·

Twilight Sparkle played by Tara Strong

Don't see the point in labeling the voice actors to characters when this is a fic and has no voices at all.

Scene slowly shows the drawing actually moving as it shows Rainbow Dash and Applejack in the corner with in front Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy, in front was Sunset Shimmer and Rarity and in the middle was Twilight as they appears normals with the pony features and everything as she holds the crown and back to back with Thunder Ace who holds the hammer with the writing and runes in it glowing and his eyes glowing just for scene turn black after that and the music also stops.

Don't see the point of doing an intro and I hope you don't plan on showing it at the beginning of every chapter as that will get annoying and repetitive as one will keep having to scroll down just to get to the actual chapter.

“I had no idea the whole school would be here.” said Sunset as she walked to the girls, as Fluttershy tries to make her feel better. Pinkie Pie and Rarity grabbed the poster, and showed it to Sunset Shimmer.

It's a school event. Why wouldn't they be there?

“It’s better I don’t tell, you wouldn’t believe me. But I tell you right now that please… be aware of Sunset Shimmer… in case she does something.”

Seems completely unprofessional on Celestia's part for her to warn a new student about Sunset. I get Sunset's case is extreme but still.

Overall fairly solid, but I hope that pointless intro isn't in future chapters and you don't just copy and paste from the episode transcript too much and actually make more original changes.

The Wanderer Saiyan