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Shot


unlucky person who deals with his problems by helping others with theirs. discord: Gun Shot#8537

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Comments ( 22 )

I like the story so far keep it up
Also if you want to add ocs to your story in the future you can add mine I'd like to see her in this universe
If not like I said keep up the good work

11399492
thank you so much!
the thing is, i actually am gathering OCs to put in, I'd be happy to add yours to the list!

11403043
Well you can add me on discord and I'll provide you with her info and bio and any other information if there is any
My discord is Lena#3184

Comment posted by THE DOCT0R deleted Oct 24th, 2022

Another great chapter!
I totally dont know about what is happening or what's to come.
Keep up the great work!

The flames roared throughout the night as some stuck by the fire telling stories, laughing, some even cheering. Before the sun rose a creaking could be heard. A gust of wind blew the smoke theatrically. Emerging from the smoke was a rusty, metal wagon topped with a large cage and several small cages and pulled by several large framed ponies. The flame illuminated several ponies within the cages, some cages contained two, even three. The large one being empty. “Hello, most revered stars,” a large unicorn greeted when he saw the banner next to the fire, a four pointed star, “I heard screams and thought I'd come do business”. It took the raiders a moment to realize what the buck meant, then the mare let out another pained scream, the sadist got a hold of her it seemed. The two bucks who brought her stepped forward, “how much you offering?” they asked, simultaneously.

Also I just saw this but
a large cage and several small cages BEING pulled by several large framed ponies

11404721
Did that on purpose, meant to have a comma though...

For those wondering shot took some time off on the weekends and now he is back so the story should go back to getting constantly updated.

11408918
Sorry for the late update for some reason I couldn't see his mail but better late than never

Due to some irl stufe happening the next chapter has been delayed to next friday.

Due to some important irl stuff that happened to the author the story will be put on hiatus for the foreseeable future

hiatus is over. the story is back on track sooner than expected!

leaving the mourning mare in silence, tears rolling over his smiling face. He needed that, I could tell. I disappeared into the darkness and found my way over to where the mare had come from.

Is it he or she?

:)

11425399
its a she, just got a faulty keyboard >:(
but thanks

11425406
Btw It's still "tears rolling over his smiling face."

11425498
fixed, thanks

The author is still working on the story. It's just coming along a bit slowly for now. I'm sure a schedule will be set down soon. Just bear with the slow updates for now.
Thank you for your patience for those of you who read the story without commenting.

11444116
yeah, sorry about that, a combination of finals coming up, irl drama, and getting distracted. forgot to let ya know 😅

I just messaged you on discord lol and refreshed the page to get a new episode.
Keep up the good work!
And don't tire yourself out! <3

Loving this story

11468739
i'm glad you're enjoying it!

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