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PurpleArtist
Hello i'm Purple Artist and i'm a friendly alicorn pleased to make your acquaintace. I'm the Prince of Defense of Equestria by being asked not coronation.
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I am not going to down vote its not that bad, its far from good very far. you need narrative voice, you need connective tissue in the story rather than just jump cutting to the next seen or just later in the seen. Don't spend a large paragraph on lists of characters that will not be important to the story, also a list of medals can be "my many medals" unless one or more of them are specifically relevant. Porn or not say every line of dialogue out load and ask your self "would the character say that?". Don't let my earnest criticism bring you down i would like you to do better.
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A. Thank you for the comment
B. I usually have an editor but she recently had surgery on her shoulder so she ain't going to help and I decided to swing it.
C. I mostly did this while tired and unfocused so that's why it's like that. Also I'm sure someone would ask what his medals are.
Ah yes. Nothing warms the heart quite like stories that promote the idea of racial supremacy, and hating others purely on the basis of their race.
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Sorry but no one and no pony is perfect.
Don't forget the episode Bridle Gossip and how everypony was afraid and didn't trust Zecora until they got to know her.
Wtf?
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What the fuck did I just read?
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I didn't force you to read it. If you hate it then fine. Honestly hate it because I don't care
You don't care that other people dislike your disgusting race play and rape story yet you respond to every message criticizing it, interesting
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I don't force people to read it. I didn't force you to read it or read the comments you did it on your own choice and how I respond is of my own free will.
"Holy ratio Batman"
Seriously, worst ratio I've ever seen in the new tab. You my friend have managed to insult the sensibilities of quite a few people. I will take the ratio as a warning to not give myself trauma, Have a nice day.
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There was a fic recently rated some 0:60 or 0:80 before the writer disabled ratings and moved on to seething in the blog. This one at least has upvotes.
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I don’t know about medals but I guess there is something wrong about this oc guetting all those medals
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Wow, that is indeed worse. Do ppl have to purposefully make something offensive at that point?
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Whats the name of the fanfic?
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It was the one about a bounty hunting chrysalis. I tried to read it and left a comment outlining its issues already. I do not suggest reading it
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Thanks for insulting my oc and his military service
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Is there an award for the most hilariously insane thing ever said on this site? Because I think you just won it.
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Ok? So? Does it look like that I care?
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You responded so yeah?
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So do you know how the fanfic is called? Your comment only made me more curious
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Honestly, I don't care. You and everyone can say how terrible this story is but I just don't give a damn what you or anyone says. Because do you think I really give a damn what anyone says? Everyone can say the meanest things but I wouldn't care less and I won't lose a minute of sleep over it. I'm not a child and I just don't care. I make stories for fun and I'm not here to pleasure you or anyone!
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I haven't read the story just the comments so far after finding it in the list and this is the only one that tells what they feel but politely. Imo this is the only good comment so far for constructive discussion. And it's not even in perfect English but gets the point across.
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That's a horrible mindset.
You have written this story and posted it to the public, so clearly, you want people to read this story. But then when people give this absolutely shit story, full of horrible writing and race play (I didn't get to the racist part since I stopped reading a few paragraphs in.), then you rush to say that you don't care, and deflect the criticism.
I think maybe, just maybe, you should try to learn how to write an actually good story.
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It's not like we all have different ways to have different stories! Also my editor she recently had shoulder surgery and didn't want to bother her with it (look up Sapphire Rose87) and I can take criticism but I write stories what I want to write and if you don't like it I'm not forcing anyone to read it. It's optional to read it also I don't care you and every one can say whatever you want because I don't care never did!
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Oh, I've seen Sapphire's stories. They aren't that great either.
You are acting completely childish. Please learn how to take criticism without acting like a baby.
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I can take criticism in a different way without acting like a baby. If I couldn't take criticism then I would've disabled the ratings and comments and wouldn't replied to any of the comments.
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I never said I hated it. I genuinely have no idea what the story is saying. I’m not a military man and I’m not going to look up a couple dozen service medals to figure out what your character is supposed to be.
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Sorry didn't know. I'm not a military man either the last person in my family to serve was my granddad and granduncle back in WW2. Honestly I wasn't having a good day. Also a majority of it I was writing well typing while tired.
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I don't understand what you mean?
How does it have racial supremacy and hating others purely on the basis of their race?
Hey… you feeling okay? You’ve gotten so many dislikes, and not so friendly comments… . You wanna talk about it? For the record I didn’t read the story yet, I’m just concerned for whenever someone is not doing well… you know?
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Hey, I have problems with criticism too! But you don’t see me complaining all over the internet do you… ? No! Have you ever even thought for a second that maybe this guy, like a selected few of us are probably autistic or just hates criticism in general for a healthy good reason… ? I didn’t think so!
So lay off pal! The world’s messed up already enough as it is… ! We really honestly don’t need you people making people like Purple to feel so bad about what’s he’s doing just because he enjoys it, alright… ? So back off!
If you’re seeing this Purple, don’t worry, I’m a friend. I’ll follow you just in case. Peace
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I'm fine now. Yesterday wasn't just my day
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If you're offensive on purpose, you may get upvotes because of Springtime for Hitler effect. Iirc, this story was a trollfic, but a very poor one.
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Alrighty. Glad I could help!
Keep working on your writing skills. Never stop improving. You’ll get better and better the more you write and take constructive criticism. Nobody’s perfect.