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I don't understand what people dislike about this story o.O Just as good as any, in my opinion
Not bad at all, just try to keep paragraph indentation and spacing consistent.
I have a feeling somebody has something against you because I thought this was very good.
Yeah, this was really good, I dunno where all the thumbs-down are coming from, seriously. Probably those people that sit on here just so they can downvote clopfics and apparently Mature-rated fics as much as they can.
...Well, it's better than nothing...
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You flatterer you...
No, no, seriously, I really thought this was rather... umm, subpar, so to speak. I wasn't feeling very creative and I had 70 minutes to write, so I guess that it's partially my fault for not practicing writing clop more often.
But considering my writing quality has been entirely consistent as long as I've been here, I'm actually sort of baffled at how different thumbs can be. Welp, I guess it's fine.
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I kinda missed some spaces here and there whilst I was writing, but thank you for the heads-up; I might never learn how to format things correctly, given how much I like walls of text, but I'll be damned if I don't try.
[In other words, I did a little revision: fixed the three indentation errors, spread five paragraphs around, stopped the comma abuse and fixed the tense inconsistencies around the middle. Sheesh, I suck at proof-reading.]
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S-something... against me?
I doubt it. Well, seeing how harsh I tend to be with myself, I can't really talk about what's good or not, but my best guess is that this -yes- deserved downvotes, because it most certainly isn't what you'd expect, I didn't expect over 10. I kind of hoped for something around 7 or 8. That would be normal.
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"Yeah, this was really good"
Oh my...
I agree. Mature-themed stories (that are either sex for the sake of sex - or mindless violence for the sake of violence) seem to get quite a bit of a tough time around the fandom. Well, I guess it's rather obvious: not everybody here is trying to read (or imagine) ponies screw; people are trying to read something else.
Well anyway, many many thanks for your words, all of you. I appreciate any kind of words being directed towards me and, well, I'm glad to have managed to get you to take a part of your time to write. Not to make myself sound like I'm egocentrical; it's just that there's something in being adressed.
Again, thank you.
I'll try harder in two more weeks.
Most likely why people dislike this is that it feels.. incomplete.
The last part especially feels like it's drawing up to something big but.. nothing.
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I agree completely. I kinda missed a chance there, to be entirely honest. If only I could write faster-- no, not write faster, just write constantly... I would have done something with that last part.
[Read again.]
Yes. It does feel very imcomplete, ah...
Well, my bad.
I'll make sure it doesn't happen again.
LOL Raritty is a gossiper
Do they have a foal?
Not yet at least.
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Chances are that in... umm, around August, I think... we'll see the newborn, if there's any.
1679834 ill keep my eye open for it
Bucking hilarious!