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Autistic Witch
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Good stuff, but it needs a bit more background to establish the setting. Terms like "hybrid vigor" and "human mates" had me thinking the girls had a minimum, nonzero level of pony at all times. When Sunset said “Ready to have that little thing quieted down?" I half-thought Twilight had a horn.
Still, again, some fun with my favorite pairing. Thank you for it. Here's hoping we get to see that experiment with the whiteboard.
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Hybrid vigor is a scientific term referring to how hybrids are larger and stronger than either parent species. Think ligers, they are the offspring of a male lion and a female tiger, and they are huge. They do have a non-zero level of pony at all times, i.e. their magic. What I was going with the "apex predator" thing is that they naturally have what made humans apex predators, guns=magic blast; planes=wings; armor=magic aura; blood hounds=hyper smelling; and so on. Their hybrid nature gives them the predatory instincts, endurance, and adaptability of humans and the magic, durability, and senses of ponies, and the vigor turns it up to eleven.
I'll add that to the term guide. I forgot it wasn't common.
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I'm familiar with hybrid vigor's usual meaning, but I think you can see how the term would make me conclude the girls were exhibiting some biological pony traits along with the magical ones.
As with the predator/prey thing, I just thought it was an amusing contrast.
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They are exhibiting biological pony traits. They need to produce magic somehow, and ponying up is similar to a werewolf's transformation. Their wings and ears are still a part of them, even if they aren't visible at all times. I'll be going more into that in later chapters.
This is fun. I want more of this.
Also, what does the rest of the world know of the girls, and magic, and equestria?
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I am working on the second chapter. As far those outside of CHS and some CPA alumni, people know very little. There are rumors and conspiracies, but the girls work hard to keep themselves and magic on the down low, aside from using it to mess with people.
Fascinating world building throughout this chapter, along with great Sciset intimacy. Loving both the clop and the story; looking forward to more.
(Though I will note that it's "per se," not "for say.")
Cute chapter, loved it! Is Sunset going to break out a strap-on at some point? Or maybe test a futa spell?
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Next chapter
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I am going to be eagerly awaiting it!
Didn't see this sort of thing coming, but it is fun to see. Especially in making sure everyone's having a good time.
More than the porn, what's keeps me coming back is the implied lore and how different this world is to canon EQG. It's weirdly fascinating.
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I do try to keep it in line with the cannon as much as possible, but with the cannon world not being fleshed out, I need to do it. The stuff about the cryptids is actually from our real world. Vietnam soldiers have described events where they've encountered bigfoot like creatures that would throw rocks at them and even throw back live grenades.
i have a feeling sunset is more like a tiger
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I do too, but adding tiger strength to her existing strength would be unsafe. Fluttershy was the one who created these forms, and her friends' safety is the highest priority.
Can't wait for the next part! And maybe other chapters exploring the other game types they mentioned?
Oh my. Quite a bit went on over the timeskip. It's all fun and games until someone robs a grave. Let's see where this goes.
I do love how much care Sunset takes to ensure the others have the final say in their control. The Dazzlings clearly left a mark on the girls.
And yes, Midnight Sparkle could absolutely garner an apocalypse cult or two if she wanted.
Ha-ell of a time to realize that, i'd say