MetalHoof is a rogue assassin in the great capital of Equestria, Canterlot. He has been wanting a change in scenery and lifestyle for the past few days. You know, settle down and raise a family. But one mishap changes his course for a new life. He is a wise man, though young in age. He has many faces and is well equipped to meet any event. Will he be able to end the search and resume finding a new life or drown in problems and mistakes?
A/N: I'm not to sure where I will head with this story but I will make sure there is an ending!
Inspired part by Assassins Tears 1 and 2, and the other part by my anatomy teacher.
Chapters (6)
You know what? I'm tracking this. One recurring error I notice is how you use the word "too" instead of "to" pretty violently. Also please stay away from words like "super" or phrases like "the pony that was killed," they make readers cringe. Interesting goal for MetalHoof so far, and I really like his cutie mark!
Was wondering when we'd see a story from you. Following.
Edit: You need to learn when to use too and to in proper places. Also. Don't be afraid to use he, him, and his instead of using his name all the time.
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Yeah sadly i messed up in and gdocs wont let me change it
. I messed up one day so "too" replaces "to". so now i have to spend alot of time looking for every little "too" but next chapter wont have that problem 
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Yeah its about time i got a story out, and the "too" problem is from gdocs. i miss used it one day i meant to auto correct and not add to dictionary. (facepalm) but yeah i'm workin on the he, his, and him thing. I'm used to using names consistently becuz of papers.
But yeah there will be edits in the next chapter
Yay Chapter 3
Nice, Story
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Thanks
Wewt Chapter 4 has arrived
Kon here awsome story i haveto read more
Spartan-107 out
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Thanks Kon!
I'm happy to hear you wish to read more!
I feel like this fic was inspired by mines.
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Halfly. I got the assassin side from you and my anatomy teacher used to be in the marines. So why not make an anatomy teacher assassin?
this is all I have to say.
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LOL heres new link
this is all I have to say.
http://qkme.me/3r61f3
shipping hmm
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If i feel like it
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