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Asher Blade


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WW2 Winston Churchill quote before Alamein we never had a victory After Alamein we never had a defeat and there were no Glocks in WWII the stingrays pistol for the Americans was the M1911

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My bad, this story was something I've been writing on the side. I don't know American history well.

WW2 Field Marshal Erwin Rommel quote don't fight a battle if you don't gain anything by winning he hasn't been for day and he's already checking them out

interesting so far

a couple small corrections. for ch1

Adanveced reckon sniper."

should be "advanced recon sniper"

for

think ya meant "four"

Ch2

for this pistol led to becoming the favorite of any soldier, marine, or navy soiler

think ya meant "navy sailor."

"Switch would you say is easier to learn with?"

Think ya meant "Wich"

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when in Rome, fuck the Romans. Plus he's army during WW2, probably sick of seeing sweaty men without shirts.

I came out of the fog and felt someone trying to get my coat off. I came around quick feeling that. I shoved whoever was on me as hard as I could. My vision was still foggy as I reached down to get my Glock. Someone grabbed me and pulled me from the jeep. I got slammed to the ground and heard someone yelling in a strong southern accent.

I think you mean grabbed my colt .45 or just m1911 pistol since there were no flicks in ww2

11257065
Just re-edit it a bit please

My friend. My amigo. My compadre. My Brother in Celestia.

I don't know American history well.

Is historical fiction the correct choice of genre?

11257565
I just wanted to write something about my new homeland, that is all. And people here seem to love the great patriotic war.

ww2 in 1944 he would have a 1911 45acp pistol not a glock

You know Twilight how about I taking your s*** and see how much you like it

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