• Member Since 12th Sep, 2018
  • offline last seen May 7th, 2023

Blackyoshi


Being a good writer doesn't mean to never fuck up, it means making the best of your mistakes

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Rarity isn't strong, or fast, or skilled with magic. But that's nothing a little deal with an Archfey can't fix.


Betareader: pip232 and Mockingbirb

Editor and generally huge help: @dragonCXV360

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Interesting fiction you got there.

I have to admit, based solely on the premise, I didn't think this was going to be very good. I was pleasantly surprised to find out that this was actually a pretty good little story. You managed to make your premise work believably, you displayed a good understanding of characterization, and left it just unsatisfying enough to make the reader want to see more. It might be a guilty pleasure for me, but I definitely wouldn't mind if I got to read a bit more of this.

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