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Angels and Devils

The Dazzlings play a game of Angels and Devils. The game starts with the Angel coming up of a nice story. The story then continues however this time, it's the devil's turn to come up with what happens next in the story by making it all sad and mean. Even with two devils and an angel, the roles switch after everyone's turn due to the odd amount of players. Will this story have a happy ending, or a bad one? Hopefully the former.

Parody of a SomethingElseYT video

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Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #1 · May 31st, 2022 · · ·

This had a good premise with lots of potential for character comedy, but unfortunately, I didn't see much of that in the finished product. All three girls feel a bit too samey the way you wrote them, so they lose a lot of the chemistry we know they have with each other. If you had made them more distinct, it probably would have been funnier, as we could see how each of them would direct the story based on their own ideas of "good" and "bad". As it is, the story they come up with is a bit too random to be really funny.