This story is a sequel to [EAW] Revelation in Hellquill
After a year of upheaval, both Strawberry Duchy and Feathisia Duchy were now fallen under the control of the forces of the Griffonian Empire ruled by the Imperial Regent Archon Eros. In an accordance with the personal order from Archon Eros himself, the Imperial forces took great priority in capturing Duke Gerlach of Feathisia and Duchess Gabriela Eagleclaw of Strawberry Duchy alive no matter the cost. And even before the Empire could fully reclaim their respective duchies, both the Duke and the Duchess were captured in a secret hideout located within the remaining territories of eastern Feathisia by the Imperial agents. While expecting a severe punishment by the agents, Duke and Duchess were shocked when they learned that Archon Eros was waiting for them in the Imperial Capital of Griffenheim. A week later, they arrived in Griffenheim under heavy escort.
Cover art by me
awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story
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Thanks!
You mean poor River Swirl went from this:
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To this:
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Pretty much, my next story will be about this.
This death God is more scary than our human Gods like Hel or Hades
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Yep unlike the other puny beings, maars works in shadows at best.
He could be anyone you knew, or he could have already won...
I hate being one to damage egos, but this is written like a Discord roleplay more than a story. What with how half of the time, the person speaking is merely denominated with their name and a colon. It's not a thing that has it's place in an actual story.
Not to add the redundant denominators, with Gerlash and Eagleclaw being referred as "Duke and Duchess" consecutively an uncomfortable amount of times.
Maybe you improved in your following stories (if you did, that's great), but reading that causes me physical discomfort.