This story is a sequel to [EAW] Wingfried von Katerinburg's speech on International Pony Menace and the Great War
The Regent Archon Eros learns that the (very) young Emperor Grover VI is in a "diplomatic meeting" with Wingfried von Katerinburg, the so-called 'Führer' of Hellquill. Archon Eros already knows about the untrustworthy and eccentric personality of Wingfried, and when he learns that not only he is in the royal palace, but also in a "meeting" with the young and naive Emperor, he is instantly overwhelmed by fear. Meanwhile, Wingfried von Katerinburg has already started applying his plans for the young and naive Emperor...
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Meh.
The dialogue between young Grover and von Katerinburg was fine. Other than that meh. There was potential for an interesting confrontation between von Katerinburg and Archon Eros, but it never materialized. The final twist is nonsensical, comes out of nowhere and isn't really in character for von Katerinburg. Trying to posses the Emperor with an ancient artefact seems more like something the more mystical von Wingenberg would try to pull off, or any of the actual Maarists that exist for that matter.
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I fully understand why you wouldn't like it. But to be honest, that's exactly what I am going for; I know that von Katerinburg was never supposed to be a mystic, but I imagined him to be something much more than just a "Hitler but he's a Griff". Katerinburg is not a follower of Maar, he was supposed to be something much more.
awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story
