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Mr_Zaaab


Never watched the show. I just make up stuff for the sake of stress relief. - Why do I have a feeling that doing this will bite me in the sides later on?

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This story is a sequel to [EAW] Twilight's Arrival in Hellquill


After her meeting with Wingfried von Katerinburg, Twilight Sparkle has decided to go to her chambers, with the hopes of dreamless sleeping, having no idea what she is about to witness.

She will soon learn that there's much she didn't know about the current state of affairs of the world.


Cover art by me

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

Twilight Reformisten path?

And thus, Twilight Maar’d like no griffin or pony ever Maar’d before. She Maar’d so hard as to join the god in laughter, before Maar’ing hard once again.

This was a disjointed and wild ride, and I’m glad that I caught sight of it while it was being written.

Maarite River Swirl when?

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Thanks, glad that someone had fun reading this highway pileup crash accident

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That's one way of putting it I guess

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Maar demands sacrifice, Twilight

Eh, I think that it would be more fun (and make me feel less bad) if Götterdämmerung was hostile to Maar, as I originally surmised from the illustrations. A similar sort to Rosa Maledicta, in a way, but less (or more?) well-intentioned.

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I actually considered the same as she could come to the realization that she is being puppetted by Maar during the game, through the actions of the player. But also keep it in mind that this is a mod concept rather than a fully fleshed-out story.

Twilight has finally taken the Red Flood pills and has gone full Artaud with Maarite Characteristics. This is just pure cursed, and it makes me experience a slight tinge of joy (except for the part that the child yeeter merely breathes)

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If she ruled Equestria, Equestria would have abolished itself

Comment posted by Mr_Zaaab deleted Oct 7th, 2022

Intriguing, let's see what's in the next chapter

Bewildered by this revelation, Archon Eros calls for an emergency meeting of the Imperial Council.

Footage of Archon Eros calling the Emergency Meeting (colorized):

and after that, without losing any valuable time, she was supposed to sneak into the Changeling Lands without the notice of anyone, and then burst all the way into the palace of Queen Chrysalis, after reaching Chrysalis she was supposed to convince her that she too was being manipulated by Maar

I wonder how this would go...
Twilight: "Chrysalis! Stop the war with Equestria!"
Chrysalis: "And why would I do that? I'm winning right now!"
Twilight: "You are being manipulated by Maar!"
Chrysalis: "Ah, why didn't you just say so. Everyling, stop the war and go back home!"

After that, Twilight would do whatever was necessary to declare herself a regent while trying to explain to her friends why she had to take Celestia out, and also explain what they had just averted in the process by doing so.

Wouldn't it be easier to involve Luna and let her lead Equestria?
She would have better chances of being accepted.

They do what Celestia had done before, suspect Twilight of not being herself, but rather an imposter in her place, pretending to be her.

What's the chance for that being actually the case?
I mean it's not as if they are already fighting against shapeshifters or something like that...

Twilight stares back at him for at least a minute.
Twilight starts laughing hysterically out of nowhere, with her whole body shaking.
Maar too eventually joins, laughing with her in a more tamed fashion.

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Okay the last one actually made me laugh out loud

How Grimdark do you want to make this?

Author: Yes

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