I originally put something very pretentious here.
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A draconic creature is brought back to the land of Equestria with a bad case of amnesia. But when he comes home, the unfortunate history between ponies and dragons is revealed. The girls are met with their most difficult, dangerous, and emotional challenge yet.
The story takes place after the events of 'The Ending of the End' from season 9.
This is my ending to My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
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I'm kind of surprised there isn't a Spike or Ember tag. Please respond to this comment.
I'm loving this so far, nice work!
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Indeed. The nature of this story deems it so.
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Thank you, good friend.
Damn. Great job on the storytelling, you know the way of "show don't tell" very well. Can't wait for more, but please, do take your time
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i agree with weird scootaloo pfp
Taking time with releases usually leads to better quality, and I did enjoy reading what you had so far. Though I must admit I am more excited about what you'll do with the dragon rather than whatever the mane six are doing
I hope to get chapter 2 out by this Friday 4/15. Though it may be pushed to Saturday.
dragons have manes in ur world? neat.
doesnt big red from dragonshy have a classic dragon look?
u mean tackle?
a good addition
`A wonderful little story that goes a bit beyond whats expected from a dragon story, especially involving the dragon fearing pony herself!!! I find this an adorable addition to dragon stories anywhere! I approve!
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll get that error fixed up!
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I am so happy to hear that you are liking it so far!
Chapter 3 will be out soon.
It ain't a mystery that this amnesia dragon is a washed-up Spike. I just want to know on what happened to him?
Well- I don't know about this, this is supposed to be after the end of mlp? but Fluttershy's character is still scared at the look of a dragon? I mean first she's had so much character development that she wouldn't be just running into a tree after seeing a dragon and two, she quite literally has a friend that's a dragon. Also isn't she a bit busy with her sanctuary? This just feels different when I first read the prologue, idk about this story now...
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Thank you so much for your feedback! A lot of the points of criticism you made have rung clear and I have considered them for my writing in the future.
1. The very first Fluttershy/Dragon encounter was intended to be a bit of a surprise to Fluttershy. As in, she wasn't expecting to see a large dragon behind her. She is used to seeing dragons, yes, but I feel like out of the many Earth-like animals she is usually around like bears, giraffes, and alligators, a dragon with a majestic physique donning razor sharp claws and and dagger-like teeth would be a little startling. Especially if said dragon is much larger than Spike.
2. Yes. The prologue was designed to introduce the reader to something new. My original character. In any case, I'm just testing the waters for this style of writing.
Again, thank you very much for your feedback, Chaos Eclipse! Have a wonderful day!
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Nay. Torran is an original character. Thank you for your comment, OP!
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Then, where is Spike?