Presumption of writing is a crime, punishable by depression.
Rainbow Dash flew west.
This story was originally written in Chinese by myself and was an entry in FimTale's 2022 Winter Writing Event ("In a Matter of a Day,") before being withdrawn.
Edited with the help from TheFlint44.
Criticisms are welcomed, especially on my choice of words.
Cover art adapted from Sebastian Voortman's Body of Water during Golden Hour, from Pexels.
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>Rainbow Dash searches for the Midday Armory
This is a beautiful and well written story.
11171227
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Wooo！
Finally, you posted your story on Fimfiction！
下一部是白沙之塔吗？doge
11171236
Don't push your luck, gentleman.
No no no no!
NO JUMPING BETWEEN TENSES LIKE THAT!
Pretty good one-shot. I can guess where some of the inspiration for this came from.
11171348
Remember, originally Chinese. I don't know much about chinese, but I do recall that they have a time-neutral tense. So take a breath, cool your heels, and let's get productive.
11171580
OK for a chinese writer this is then actually pretty good . .
11171348
Oops, I see what you mean. I shouldn’t have hurried myself to publish this. I’m working on the grammar issues now. Thank you for pointing the problem out!
11171571
And I can guess where you've guessed. ;)
11171580
Thank you for your kind words!
More precisely, Chinese is always time-neutral. You use adverbs and particles to indicate when an event takes place.
11171752
Very good!
What a joke. From the title to story description to the actual content, you're just keep referencing others' works. Works that your own doesn't even hold a candle to. A shallow and self-moaning story coated in layers and layers of labyrinthine and barely-readable sentences. You did FimTale the world of good by withdrawing from their contest.