Congratulations！You come across the only heartwarming story about immortality in all around the world without Sad and Tragedy tag !
Many bronies were upset or even angry about the immortality, especially the S9E26，some of fans considered it was a bad ending. However, with the official settings unchanged，I found a way out and I wanted to share with you here.
This story was written in Chinese originally and it came from fimtale.com，a Chinese fiction website for MLP. The original address is here.
I‘m the original author and also the translator. Co-translator：Sunrise_Shimmer, Wimple
Chapters (4)
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Why would you even use that image as cover art. WHY!!!!!!!!
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Was that something wrong with the cover image？？？
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I just hate the whole Season 9 arc. It's so stupid. -_-
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At first，I also hated S9，especially the S9E26 and the immortality. But I just found another way out, no more tragedy ever. Actually, the immortality of Twilight was not the offical setting，Jim Miler never admitted the immortality, so it's not true. I don't understand why so many bronies believe it. That‘s why I shared this story.
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It's a popular fan theory. One there since the beginning of the fandom. Many people still want to cling to it.
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I still don‘t understand why they would rather accept such a tragedy than find another way out. Do sadness can make them feel better？Do they prefer tragedies rather than heartwarming stories?
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I suspect so.
Not bad. Hope you'll check mine out when you get the chance! Passing On Together and its midquel Luster Dawn Friendship Successor.
I don't know about the only heartwarming immortality story ever written. But this is good nonetheless.
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And you see I'm not the only one who had the idea of Twilight making Luster her Successor.
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The problem is they use that Living Forever is Awesome trope to brainwash people into thinking its okay. They use it as a positive way to be immortal, I say screw the awesomeness of life.
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I also disagree with the idea that they were all immortal.
This story has given a good reason.
It feels a little sudden, with Celestia and Luna taking over so quickly. Also, I’m surprised that everyone (or at least most everyone) accepted their rule so quickly.
I’m excited for the rest of the story, though!
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Ahaha! You have thwarted the evil of immortality! I applaud you!
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Fixed.
So many fans were upset about the ending because of the immortality. I just wanted to tell everyone that's not true, please don't be sad.
You should stopped your story at Part Two.
The last part was the most unrealistic, antilogous, and, sorry for mentioning it, illiterate.
But for the grand idea - that Friendship evolutionary won over dissent and does not need magic of immortality to support in any longer - it is wonderful...
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You are right. When I wrote this story, I was going to end it in part two, but I found it was too short, and I wanted Twilight's friends to show up.
Actually, this story was written in Chinese originally. And the last part involved some ancient Chinese poetry, so it may not express accurately after being translated into English, or maybe my English writing is not good enough.
Anyway, thanks for reading.