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TheFlint44


On my way of exploring the art of translation. :)

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The Little Pony is a happy pony. She plays outside with her friends everyday. She wears the prettiest clothes, eats the yummiest dishes, chases the cutest butterflies, and gazes the brightest rainbow, but sometimes, there would also be dark clouds.

Additional tags: implied Twilight Sparkle; implied Princess Celestia; implied Lauren Faust; implied human.


This is a translation of a story which was originally written in September, 2019 (Before the finale!). I am the author and also the translator. The original Chinese version can be found here.

Mimicked the style of The Star In Yellow.

Now with a review by PaulAsaran. Yay~! :yay:

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Comments ( 11 )

Beautiful story!

She’d even collect every bit of air the Little Pony breathed if she could.

I thought this part was particularly cute and clever. Overall a pleasant little story with a twinge of sadness, like most good stories.

I got really depressed when the finale was about to come, and I wrote this to dispel my sadness

I felt kinda sad when the finale finale aired too. Watching episodes live every weekend had become part of my routine for a long time, and it gave me something to look forward to on a regular basis.

Comment posted by WatchTower1992 deleted Sep 11th, 2021
Comment posted by TheFlint44 deleted Sep 11th, 2021
Comment posted by WatchTower1992 deleted Sep 11th, 2021

How long could a life like this last?

At least a decade.:twilightsheepish:

Oh, so that was the reason. Alright, set off then. The Little Pony smiled. She had seen the whole world and left her hoofprints here. What more could she ever ask for?

So she set forth, singing.

And brought a storybook with her.

Hope I can be that optimistic. At some point in our life, we have to kiss goodbye to those who we loved, or something we cherished.
Time can relieve the pain, but it will still sting every time I think about it.
It is an adorable story with a sad undertone. You did a good job capturing the emotions. I'm really looking forward to your future story.:heart:

This hit me in the heart.
It seems we both had to write a story to push past the pain of the show ending. I hope your writing of this nice story helped you get through the hard times. Good writing often does.

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Thank you! You are very kind. :heart:

Nice little short story

That was wonderful... and sad, too.
Well, we are still here, we still love the Little Pony, doesn't this mean that she is alive?

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