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Never-After-All-Readings


I do YouTube reading of Fanfictions, you can find me here https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCc6rOMPBjQDzV3iVEBBJsRA

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I like these, they're pretty good.

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This one has at least 1 or 2 more chapters, But the whole point of the series was kind of to give closure to character deaths we didn't have in the original fallout Equestria.

Sadly discord can't die so I had to come up with something different which is why this one's gonna be a little longer

I find it scarry that something as depressing as this, is so well written.

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thanks it took a lot of writing and rewriting to get it to feel that way, this was not an easy one to get right, so I am glad that you liked it

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Other villains probably not. villains are a lot harder to write than characters who actually show empathy and want to like people, the jesters hanged court was only originally supposed to be one chapter but it's so hard to get people to sympathize for discord or for discord to sympathize losing ponies so it turned out to be a multi chapter one

It was in the silence of his grove that the smallest of cracking sounds could be heard, as the tears of a weeping god, met with its master's only true failure, the blood of innocent fouls.

there is a slight tippo, unless you didn't mean foals.

The lives of the two ponies is a small price to pay for your freedom, they're doomed to die anyway.

Comment posted by Never-After-All-Readings deleted Feb 17th, 2022

Small typo, but a : counts as a . So the "the" in your title should be with a capital T

I knew coming into this there wouldn't be a happy ending but I still feel so bad for discord and the foals
10/10 would cry again

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