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Beautiful.
The only thing I don't like is the line "...she simply cried a river of tears that no pony could ever match in 200 years."
It is rather cringey and overdramatic for the situation. Furthermost, when writing numbers in formal text, like a story, you would write the words, not the number (e.g. "Two hundred").