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Never-After-All-Readings


I do YouTube reading of Fanfictions, you can find me here https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCc6rOMPBjQDzV3iVEBBJsRA

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Beautiful.

The only thing I don't like is the line "...she simply cried a river of tears that no pony could ever match in 200 years."

It is rather cringey and overdramatic for the situation. Furthermost, when writing numbers in formal text, like a story, you would write the words, not the number (e.g. "Two hundred").

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