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EggnogMilk


A random person who'll probably never write a good story.

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Is this story based off of Love Me, Seriously?!

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Honestly have never heard of it, if it's too similar to that story I'll take this down. I'm sorry if this is the case.

oh no, Celestia might of spilled the beans.

"Okay, this must be a dream, right...?" You say outloud, your mind calming from the slight panic you had just before. "A lucid dream too, my uh... first one... didn't think they felt this real,(——" you continue with, noticing you're wearing what you fell asleep with on: a Cheetos t-shirt and sweatpants. Truly the pinnacle of fashion.

Still kinda passed at the final episode, but really, it was probably the best way to end things. Maybe.

I’m surprised he didn’t get depression when it ended. I mean that’s what happened to me.

Quickly looking around to make sure no one saw that, you try to relax again, sighing.

"Y-yeah, I'm fine... just spaced out, that's all,(——" you say to her, wiping the sweat off your forehead. Is it hot in here or what, can we get a window open?

then my family has you covered in Sweet Apple Acres,(——" she speaks in her country accent, giving you a smile as she backs up to let someone else talk to you.

"Hey, you seem cool enough I guess, and anyone that's friends with Pinkie is fine with me,(——" while holding her hoof out.

"Well, Nate darling, I'd be happy to have you as a friend, but there's something I think I should do for you,(——" she says, looking into your eyes with a weird gaze.

"It's been good... um, do you like... animals?" She asks, with her speech barely able to be heard over the party going on that you honestly forgot was happening.
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"Oh yeah, I love animals! I used to have a few pet cats when I was younger,(——" you enthusiastically say, which makes her face go from nervous to one of glee.

Twilight walks up to you and smiles, saying, "Hello, I'm Twilight Sparkle, what's yours?" She asks, despite the fact it's been said multiple times now.

"Oh, I'm living in a house in the Everfree Forest,(——" you say straightforwardly, which seems to startle Twilight a bit.

and I haven't gotten around to setting them up, so I've been keeping them here,(——" she says, walking up to you.

wings to get away from anything attacking you,(——" Twilight answers, while also continuing with,

I'm going with you in there to make sure you get home safe.(——"

affection, as in you trust that per-pony,(——" you explain, with Twilight staring at you and seemingly taking it at face value.

so that made it easier to make my decision,(——"

I just meant it'd take a long time to trust anyone here,(——" you explain, which seems to work well enough, as Twilight's frown is changed from that to a look of understanding.

Most of them seem to be ones on Equestrian history and magic,

Ugh, maybe it's just because I was nervous about meeting my childhood heroes... yeah, that's gotta be it,(——"

"Well, probably should've expected that... still worth a try, I suppose,(——" you say to yourself,

No one knows about your real self yet, and you want to keep it that way.

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Actually it's a visual novel. You can find out more about it here. Please respond to this comment.

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Oh, i get it now, sorry about that. Glad to finally know what you meant, I don't really read mangas or watch anime, so I thought you meant another story on here. Sorry for the misunderstanding!

you've gotta rewatch the show at some point,

Pony again, as (—-well as Doctor Who, uh... oh yeah,

me, you know.(——" you say, stumbling on your words a bit at the end.

It was hard just trying to keep Twilight from smothering me with questions.(——"

of it surprising you as (——well as nearly making you pass out immediately.

Have a good sleep, Nate.(——" Celestia answers,

Can we get more chapters like this soon

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Probably not? This is the first time I've ever written something like this, and quite honestly it felt like a chore to do since I didn't really enjoy writing it. Might write more like this in the future, but who knows?

"Oh hey Nate, watcha been up to? I've been meaning to talk,(——" she says, with a nice smile on her muzzle and walking with a nice vibe. You truly want to give her a big smile, but the headache prevents you from doing so.

but he's helping Rarity out, you remember her right?"

it requires something specific.(——" she says, sort of mumbling near the end.

so you say,(—— "It requires what?", with a concerned tone in your voice.

a phoenix egg, or... sexual pleasure.(——" she says, blushing at the end.

"Twilight, your adorable when you do that... I appreciate you being honest, I'll try to get better.(——" you reply, making her breathe in deep as she goes back in for more, letting out a small,(—— "okay".

so I'll apologize in advance if it doesn't feel good.(——" she mumbles,

"It's fine, go at your own pace. I'm new to this aswell, so... go wild, I guess.(——" you reply,

me clean this up.(——" she says,

SO much fun for you, just you wait, hon.(——" she says,

variables.(——" she answers, looking at you. "Nate, please, when our child is born, promise... promise to help me raise them..."

You pause for a moment, trying to take this all in. You nod, continuing with, "Of course Twilight, I'd never leave anyone to care for a child alone. I'll help, don't worry".

Twilight masterfully engineered this situation. Consider your cummies stolen.

Well congratulations you are a father

well this just jumped into overdrive

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Yeah, I'm honestly not all to happy with what I did with the story. I'll try to get it back on track, though.

This isn't a bad story to be honest, keep it up.

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