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BiniBean


Simply existing

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A Head Librarian of the Royal Canterlot Library, Bini Filters, has to read fanfiction across Equestria because...Well...She doesn't quite know why. Something about the possibility of threats being hidden in their pages. . She finds one story that has a twist she didn't see coming. (Dislestia)

I wrote this story a few months ago, I wasn't sure I was going to post it but decided I may as well. Someone might like it. Don't expect too much out of it, it is pretty short but I had fun writing it.

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As someone who once specialized in reading bad fanfic, I related to Bini’s frustration and mild insanity. “It’s not good, but at least it’s different” indeed!

As far as this story goes, I thought it could have used a little more build-up. For example, Bini could have read a few other cliched stories before getting to the apple farmer. It would help to build her frustration and diminishing mental stability leading up to the twist. Of course, that gets difficult on an actual fanfiction site because there’s a good chance you’ll end up calling someone’s favorite trope trash, so I understand why you didn’t.

Anyways, it was a nice little story. Keep it up!

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