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Lightning Sprint

Fly High~


In Appleloosa, the tavern is one of the most populated locations. For this reason, many members of staff need to be hired. One of these members of staff is Meadow, a unicorn mare who works as a bartender. Along with her two good friends, Early Bird and Sugar Spice, as well as the rest of the staff, Meadow works hard to bring in customers and earn those sweet sweet bits. This shift in particular, however, will test the staff's resolve. Buckle down, it's gonna be a long night.

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Comments ( 5 )

Haven’t finished but it looks good so far

I'm glad you're liking it so far.

It’s a pretty cool story. I can admire Slice of Life like this, where it takes the term fairly literally. It’s really just ponies doing service duty in a restaurant. It’s not the most interesting story I’ve read, but that also isn’t really the point. I’m curious to see if you’re going to write more like this.

Grammar’s pretty decent, though you could stand to use periods a little less.

Thank you very much. I appreciate your honesty and if you would like to see more stories from me I'd be happy to make them.

This story is awesome, friend. Definitely gonna read more of it! Good job!

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