18 and reconsidering the whole "authorial exploit" once more.
Fluttershy is content. Her life is swell, her friends are well, the animals around her were thriving: what could go wrong? Well, a popular little game may just want to intervene with her life...
I'm back! The laptop is working, I'm back from holiday, I can write again!
Just thought of this idea whilst on holiday. Constructive criticism is welcome, and thanks to everyone who reads this!
-FluttershyAllTheWay
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>Tetris
*adds to read later*
I liked this, it will be interesting to see how you continue with it. Although I did see a small issue:
"It was her first game maybe, but definitely not her last. She liked this game; the self-satisfaction given from it was amazing. All she had to do now was learn how to do it all correctly and discover which button contolled what."
This paragraph is repeated towards the end, but that was only a minor mistake that didn't detract from the overall experience.
1235621 Thanks for the conment! I can write again tonight.
As for the mistake, that's my reorganisation skills failing me. 
If she thought Tetris was great, wait till she plays Link's Awakening DX--- that shit was amazing.
Good job I like it
1235974 Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you liked it.
Addicting game is addicting.
1237082 My mate would agree.
Dear Heaven, the ponies discover gaming.
well? freaking finish it! one does not simply write half a book.
good story so far i guess.
4/5
1260450 Thanks for your rating! Sorry for not uploading more often, I'm a very busy person and I get about 10 hours a week to write in.
This sounds interesting.
*Add to read later; sees read later is on 411 now*e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/surprise.gif
Wow, I need to read more.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
1264597 Well, I hope you enjoy it.
Yeah, I felt like going for something more obscure and orginal, so I wrote about Tetris. 
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I don't know how much I can read. Have to use my phone to read fan-fiction now, and that is not a big screen. It is better then nothing when you can't use a good internet. But it is too much. And whit school, it is fealing like Tartarus at the moment. Too many fictions, too little time.
1264635 Yeah I know, I only have access to computers for writing and reading for about 10 hours a week, which really restricts me. Sure I can read on my iPod, but that isn't really easy. I know I have a lot of chapter updates to read, but they will have to wait until I get my new laptop. But, yeah, you have all of my empathy. Thanks for the follow though.
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I have 1949 unread chapters too to read dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
I am really in a pit there, and whit a limit of 5GB of internet each month I can't do much. I have two livestreams each month I want to see that takes up maybe 1.5GB.
That GDoc is crap now on my android so I can't read things from EQD is not helping ether.
LOL poor Flutters
Pretty good so far. It does an excellent job of reminding me of the many sleepless nights I've spent playing Tetris.
...Although I will say that being thrown across the room wouldn't've caused any damage to a Game boy.
126939 Well yeah, but I needed something, didn't I?
Either way, thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. 
*teehee* silly
And then Twi gets addicted XD. Glad to see this updated.
*Fails schedule set last chapter*
This is amusing, and reminiscent of my reaction when I got my first gaming device.
Your jumps out of character are kind of irritating though.
1853879 Yeah, I understand why you'd think that
I suppose I intentionally included that to increase the possible outcomes of the story... Probably? 
Either way, it's nice to see you've stuck around for this long to see an update. Thank you!
1853944 Yeah, about the schedule fail... Blame the death of my laptop!
You mention my slipping out of character annoys you... I suppose you are referencing my attempts at adding a slight touch of out-of-character humour? If so, yeah, I can stop doing that. Thanks for the criticism!
YAY update
Oh i hope it back fire on her, rember twi is an egghead so my gusse so be just as hook even more. So ya good update and i love it still.
1854299 I'm glad to hear you like it!
I will continue to update from now on. We will see what happens as we progress with Twilight... 
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What sorcery is this?!
Ah Tetris we meet again
1892961 Gotta love Tetris!
Well who didn't see that coming a mile away?
1896249 Yeah, I know: predictable...
Frogive me, please!
1896356 Not complaining haha I just know the power of Tetris would control anypony. ^_^
... I remember my first time playing Tetris.
It was exactly like this. You couldn't get me away from the computer and I'd do anything to play it.
Fabulous job, dude. Just perf.
1897282 Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading my story.
How all of us get consumed by a game or hobby and claim it’s good for us…? I will never know. It’s a surprise how you were able to pull off a breaking the fourth wall dimension thing but still keeping the characters in character… Nice work. I really like this story and I couldn't stop until I finished the story... it was one great read.
2091674 Thank you very much! It means a lot to me knowing that someone enjoyed reading my story