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Oh boy, here we go.
Ahahaha, whatever happens next is going be awesome.
I adored the scene with the pond and the fish swimming around Twi, couldn't stop grinning while reading.
You're using "y'all" improperly. "Y'all" is a contraction of "you all", and serves the purpose of a plural second person pronoun. It is only used when referring to multiple people.
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And I live in the south, where I hear the contraction used exactly as I've written it here every single day.
Huh, I remember this story. It was amusing. I'm not sure how you'd adapt it to a multi-chapter work but I look forward to finding out.
This is a great read and very close to the feel of the actual episodes. It reads precisely like the other "Twilight overreacts"-episodes, so well done, it's rare that people get that close to the feel of the show.
It's funny, I had the exact same thought as Starborn Shield about "y'all", but decided that I might just be mistaken. It's not like accents and slang are always logical anyway. Double negatives and "ain't" are great examples of that.
lol this is awsome
why are there so many deleted comments?
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This is a rewrite, so the older comments were referencing things that are no longer there. I deleted them all so people wouldn't backread and get confused.
This is pretty amusing, even though I am not the biggest fan of "Twilight overreacts" plots
I love how Twilight goes for tub, to pond, to a freaking lake. Next step is the ocean ... where she sets the whole thing on fire. If Sweetie Belle has the power to burn drinks. Than Twilight should be able to turn an ocean to ash.
Anywho. Funny story, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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She could start a protection racket. "That's a very nice ocean you have there. It would be a real shame if that ocean were to-- BURN DOWN!"
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Flame War? In a fanfic Called "En Fuego"?
aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww man i hate these short stories (even though this had more than a few thousand words)
well anyway good work it was enjoyable
I liked the moral of today's episode. Will definitely re-watch several times over!
Great lesson