Fluttershy, the yellow pegasus with yellow hair and green eyes

Well, they’re a moderate cyan according to the wiki. Figures, they’d literally be the colour of Rainbow Dash.

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Fixed. Shows what cold medicine does to me when lacking sleep as well.

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story

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Thanks for reading. Hoping to hit that one big story that launched people to notice my writing where it would be viable to make a living even as a part time worker and have Patreon/Ko-fi/Substar pay for the rest. Until then I'll be putting out as I can. All I can do is hope other share my stories around to friends, or groups to attract the attention.

Nice work!

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.

Really enjoyable! Decent stuff for a cough medicine induced bit of raunchy fiction.

Certainly not opposed to reading another chapter featuring Rarity!

In terms of kinks, I think this is just about the right level for me personally. Any more extreme is about where I draw the line.

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I'm glad you enjoyed and appreciate the feedback. I'm always trying to balance the two extremes, but sometimes that gets really blurred on what people will consider extreme or normal. Though I normally will mark in the kinks what to expect ahead of time so those can be outright avoided by those who wish to not be exposed to them.

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Oh definitely, and I appreciate that you do highlight said kinks in the description.

Based on those kinds of descriptions I pretty quickly figure out if I'm the intended audience or not.

Generally dig your writing style and wide variety of kinks covered, looking forward to seeing what else you might be cooking up.

looked good but seeing

Minor smegma

as a kink listed put me off but hope others enjoy